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2014-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Was shhocked has been taught has said will be published remembers The coral was burried by the shrimp long times ago. But now It come back. It became more beautiful. I'm so thankful to our god.(but I'm not believe in god.)

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom! Thank you for doing your homework. I\'m glad that the coral became more beautiful. ^^ I hope to see it someday. ^^ I encourage you to go over the corrections below. If you have any questions, please feel free to raise it in class. Don\'t forget to study the words I gave you on your page.Good night.Teacher Nina   Was shhocked >> Correct ( spelling check: shocked ^^) has been taught >> has been teaching has said >> has been said will be published >> Correctremembers >> CorrectThe coral was burried by the shrimp long times ago. >> The coral was burried by the shrimp long time ago. But now It come back. >> But now it came back. It became more beautiful. >> CorrectI\'m so thankful to our god.(but I\'m not believe in god.) >> I\'m so thankful to our God. But I\' don\'t believe in God.

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