homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi my teacher. ^^
Thank you for your advice.
Actually, I tried to give up to learn English last weekend because speaking English to learn is very difficult.
Unfortunately, I still couldn't understand part of your English speaking.
However, I will try it again.
Here is my homework.
I want my children to speak English for themself.
I hope that my children see a lot of things in the world.
Also, I want to go overseas with my children.
Because I envry my firends.
My friends often go to overseas with their children to sightseeing.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I just read your message. please don\'t give up learning English, okay.
I\'m sorry if my pacing was still fast for you. Well, I will try
my best to slow down a bit more for you. With regards to
your homework, your sentences are good however there are some errors as well as
misspelled words. Please study those.
I just want to say that, \"Giving up what you have started cannot educate you\". So,
please don\'t give up. I understand your situation but please try and try until you succeed.
Anyway, take care always and see you in our class.
~~Teacher Kris
>> Correct ^^
Thank you for your advice.
Thank you for your advice.
>> Correct
Actually, I tried to give up to learn English last weekend because speaking English to learn is very difficult.
Actually, I tried to give up to learn English last weekend because speaking English to learn is very difficult.
>> Actually, I tried giving up learning English last weekend because learning how to speak English is very difficult.
Unfortunately, I still couldn\'t understand part of your English speaking.
Unfortunately, I still couldn\'t understand part of your English speaking.
>>Correct
>> OR: Unfortunately, I couldn\'t grasp some of the words or phrases that you were delivering.
However, I will try it again.
>> Correct
Here is my homework.
However, I will try it again.
>> Correct
Here is my homework.
>>Correct
I want my children to speak English for themself.
I want my children to speak English for themself.
>>I want my children to speak English fluently for themselves.
I hope that my children see a lot of things in the world.
I hope that my children see a lot of things in the world.
>> I hope that my children would see a lot of things in the world.
Also, I want to go overseas with my children.
Also, I want to go overseas with my children.
>>Correct
>> OR: Also, I want go to other countries with my children.
Because I envry my firends.
Because I envry my firends.
>>Because I envy my friends.
My friends often go to overseas with their children to sightseeing
My friends often go to overseas with their children to sightseeing
>> My friends often go to other countries with their children for sightseeing.
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