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2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Reina

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If I can choose a super power, I would like to have ability to move instantly. That is because there are so many people in subway in the morning. When I get to my office every morning, I get very tired so hope to go home immediatly and take a rest. If I have the abilty, I would not need to take a subway in the morning. If I can move instantly, I would also be able to go to Philipine and see my beautiful teacher, Reina. I am really looking forward to the conversation with my teacher tonight.

강사 첨삭

Wow [이름]!   I really love this composition of yours. It made me smile specially the last part! kkk I am also looking forward to talking to you tonight. Keep on sharing a lot about yourself and your ideas! Good job! See you FLASH!!! ^,^   Teacher Reina *,*   If I can choose a super power, I would like to have ability to move instantly.>>> If I can choose a super power, I would like to have the ability to move instantly. That is because there are so many people in subway in the morning. >>> correct! ^^When I get to my office every morning, I get very tired so hope to go home immediatly and take a rest.>>> When I get to my office every morning, I get very tired so I hope to go home immediately and take a rest. >>> OR: When I get to my office every morning, I feel very tired so I hope to go home immediately and take a rest. If I have the abilty, I would not need to take a subway in the morning.>>> correct! ^^If I can move instantly, I would also be able to go to Philipine and see my beautiful teacher, Reina.>>> If I can move instantly, I would also be able to go to the Philippines and see my beautiful teacher Reina. ^,^I am really looking forward to the conversation with my teacher tonight. >>> correct! ^^

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