homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can choose a super power, I would like to have ability to move instantly.
That is because there are so many people in subway in the morning.
When I get to my office every morning, I get very tired so hope to go home immediatly and take a rest.
If I have the abilty, I would not need to take a subway in the morning.
If I can move instantly, I would also be able to go to Philipine and see my beautiful teacher, Reina.
I am really looking forward to the conversation with my teacher tonight.
강사 첨삭
Wow [이름]!
I really love this composition of yours.
It made me smile specially the last part! kkk
I am also looking forward to talking to you tonight.
Keep on sharing a lot about yourself and your ideas!
Good job! See you FLASH!!! ^,^
Teacher Reina *,*
If I can choose a super power, I would like to have ability to move instantly.>>> If I can choose a super power, I would like to have the ability to move instantly. That is because there are so many people in subway in the morning. >>> correct! ^^When I get to my office every morning, I get very tired so hope to go home immediatly and take a rest.>>> When I get to my office every morning, I get very tired so I hope to go home immediately and take a rest.
>>> OR: When I get to my office every morning, I feel very tired so I hope to go home immediately and take a rest. If I have the abilty, I would not need to take a subway in the morning.>>> correct! ^^If I can move instantly, I would also be able to go to Philipine and see my beautiful teacher, Reina.>>> If I can move instantly, I would also be able to go to the Philippines and see my beautiful teacher Reina. ^,^I am really looking forward to the conversation with my teacher tonight.
>>> correct! ^^
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