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2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Myra

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Essay: How would you make others like you? ---------------------------------------------- I think a first impression is very important, so I normally try to look tidy. and I try to listen to carefully when others speak. Also I laugh a lot, I guess my laugh and smile make the mood comfortable when I talk with others. and lastly I try to approach them first talking about my past, family, etc. This is my know-how to make others like me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [Name] dear!! :))

Good day to you!
How are things going on? I hope all is well with you and your family!

I know you\'re a very good person, so stay compassionate to others! :))
~~Teacher Myra~~
Essay: How would you make others like you?
I think a first impression is very important, so I normally try to look tidy.
>>CORRECT
OR>> First impression lasts, so I always look presentable
and I try to listen to carefully when others speak.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I try to listen to others first.
Also I laugh a lot, I guess my laugh and smile make the mood comfortable when I talk with others.
>>Also I laugh a lot, so I guess my laughter and smile make the mood comfortable when I talk with others.
and lastly I try to approach them first talking about my past, family, etc.
>>Lastly, I try to approach them first to talk about my past, my family, etc.
This is my know-how to make others like me.
>>CORRECT (Great expression!^^)

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