homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I'll have a wich that my family be more healthy.
I also want to make a wish to be a biologist.
I wan't to have a big fish tank where I'll be able to breed alot of fishes and coral.
How about you?
강사 첨삭
Good evening TOM!
Thank you for sharing about your wishes. ^^
I am sure that it will come true.
I will pray that you will become a Biologist in the future.
My wish is the same. I want my parents to live longer.
And of course, to continue working here at Power English. ^^
Have a great night. Teacher Nina
I\'ll have a wich that my family be more healthy.
>> My wish is that my family will be healthier. ( spelling check: wish ^^)
>> OR: If I\'ll have a wish that will come true, I want my family to be healthier.I also want to make a wish to be a biologist.
>> I also want to be a Biologist. I wan\'t to have a big fish tank where I\'ll be able to breed alot of fishes and coral.
>> Correct How about you?
>> Correct
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