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2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I'll have a wich that my family be more healthy. I also want to make a wish to be a biologist. I wan't to have a big fish tank where I'll be able to breed alot of fishes and coral. How about you?

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Good evening TOM! Thank you for sharing about your wishes. ^^ I am sure that it will come true. I will pray that you will become a Biologist in the future. My wish is the same. I want my parents to live longer. And of course, to continue working here at Power English. ^^ Have a great night. Teacher Nina   I\'ll have a wich that my family be more healthy. >> My wish is that my family will be healthier. ( spelling check: wish ^^) >> OR: If I\'ll have a wish that will come true, I want my family to be healthier.I also want to make a wish to be a biologist. >> I also want to be a Biologist. I wan\'t to have a big fish tank where I\'ll be able to breed alot of fishes and coral. >> Correct How about you? >> Correct

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