homework

Hi, Paula I am thankful that you help me amend the mistakes of my composition every day. It is very useful for me. ^^ Thank you very much~. *ESSAY: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives. I think automobile is one of the most comfortable transportation vehicles. If we have an automobile, we can go everywhere. In my case, my boyfriend has his own car, and he drives me to where I want to go. Not that long ago, he didn’t have his own car. At that time, there were some limits to take a trip without a car. We like going camping,and to go camping,we used to rent a car before. Looking back, renting a car was very inconvenient and cumbersome. Now I really appreciate him giving me such a good usability and enjoyment. Of course, I am paying half gasoline charge for the car. Hehehe.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Wednesday! ^^   It\'s my privilege to help you with your composition. Frankly speaking I like reading and correcting other people\'s works. Hahaha ~~~ ^^ I just think it is very interesting.   By the way, I would like to say a big \"WOW\" to you. I like the way you expressed your thoughts through your composition. I also want to say that YOU ARE VERY LUCKY. You have a boyfriend with his own wheels.   Anyway, about your composition, make sure that when you give a general information, make the subjects plural. In addition, be careful with the structure of your sentences.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi, Paula >> Hi Paula!I am thankful that you help me amend the mistakes of my composition every day.>> CORRECT! It is very useful for me. ^^ >> CORRECT! Thank you very much~. >> CORRECT! *ESSAY: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people\'s lives.I think automobile is one of the most comfortable transportation vehicles. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I think automobile is one of the most comfortable means of transportation. If we have an automobile, we can go everywhere. >> If we have automobiles, we can go everywhere. In my case, my boyfriend has his own car, and he drives me to where I want to go. >> CORRECT! Not that long ago, he didn’t have his own car. >> Not that long ago, he didn\'t have his own car. At that time, there were some limits to take a trip without a car. >> CORRECT! We like going camping,and to go camping,we used to rent a car before. >> We like going camping and to go camping. We used to rent a car before. Looking back, renting a car was very inconvenient and cumbersome. >> CORRECT! Now I really appreciate him giving me such a good usability and enjoyment.>> Now, I really appreciate him giving me such a good time and enjoyment. Of course, I am paying half gasoline charge for the car. Hehehe. >> CORRECT!