Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the given view seems successful most of the time, but I cannot fully support due to the extreme expression it gives.
Certainly I totally agree that it is a good idea that praise stimulates students to act positively. However, ignoring the negative behaviors is a bad way for students' future.
For example, consider a student who studies sincerely and performs well in her exam. It means that she should necessarily be praised by her teacher so as to encourage her. On the contrary, if she behaves discourteously and neglects her duty, it is imperative to criticize and chide for her fault since they would not know whether it is right or not if you ignored.
Hence, in summary the best way to teach is to praise the positive actions and criticize the negative ones, rather than ignoring them.
I wonder you had a great holiday,Rose.
강사 첨삭
Welcome back, [이름]^^
Thanks for your concern regarding my holiday~
I just overslept, overate, overindulged!
Ha! Ha! But of course, we have to go back to reality~
Anyways, balance is the key to achieve what we want^^
Compliments are nice if not overdone.
Punishments, however, are great ways to show that some behaviors are not acceptable.
May you have a nice weekend, honey!
I think the given view seems successful most of the time, but I cannot fully support due to the extreme expression it gives.
>>I think the given view seems successful most of the time, but I cannot fully support it due to the extreme expression it gives.Certainly I totally agree that it is a good idea that praise stimulates students to act positively.
>>I totally agree that it is a good idea that praise stimulates students to act positively.
However, ignoring the negative behaviors is a bad way for students\' future. >>CORRECT!For example, consider a student who studies sincerely and performs well in her exam.
>>CORRECT!
It means that she should necessarily be praised by her teacher so as to encourage her.
>>CORRECT!On the contrary, if she behaves discourteously and neglects her duty, it is imperative to criticize and chide for her fault since they would not know whether it is right or not if you ignored.
>>On the contrary, if she behaves discourteously and neglects her duty, it is imperative to criticize and chide her for her fault since she would not know whether it is right or not.Hence, in summary the best way to teach is to praise the positive actions and criticize the negative ones, rather than ignoring them. >>CORRECT!I wonder you had a great holiday,Rose.
>>I wonder you if had a great holiday, Rose.
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