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2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday, I could understand your class. Thank you for your consideration. Here is my homework. I believe most people can't learn everything in school. I couldn't go university but I learned a lot of things in my office. Also, I teached my new co-workers my experiences. They learned a lot of thing in university but they didn't know than me. That's why I believe most people can't learn everything in school. See you later. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Thank you so much that you were able to understand my class. It shows that you are improving. That is good. I\'m happy that you made your homework. Well, I agree as well that you can\'t learn everything in school. As they say, experience is still the best teacher. I can say that are generous because you are sharing your experiences to your co-workers. I\'m proud of you. Anyway, kindly study the following corrections with regards to your grammar, okay.

Have a happy holiday, [이름]. Take care.

See you.

~~ Teacher Kris

Yesterday, I could understand your class.

>> Yesterday, I was able to understand your class.
Thank you for your consideration.

>> Correct
Here is my homework.

>> Correct
I believe most people can\'t learn everything in school.

>> I believe that most people can\'t learn everything in school.

I couldn\'t go university but I learned a lot of things in my office.

>> I couldn\'t study in the university but I learned a lot of things in my office.
Also, I teached my new co-workers my experiences.

>> Also, I shared my new experiences to my co-workers.
They learned a lot of thing in university but they didn\'t know than me.

>> They learned a lot of things in the university but I know more than them.
That\'s why I believe most people can\'t learn everything in school.

>> That\'s why I believe that most people can\'t learn everything in school.
See you later. ^^

>> Correct

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