Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, there! Jessie.
DId you have a wonderful holiday? I did actually.
I'll tell you about this in talking. But I want you to tell me about yours too.
Let's see soon!
<Essay>
We, koreans should abandon the discrimination for foreigners. Although foreigners has been appearing in the show on TV, but many people still absolutely have a bad thought about them. Of course I can't say that I have nothing... But anyway we need to change our stereotypes at least we're living in the international era.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this.
I do hope it will change.
Though I think it would be hard since we cannot dictate what a person should change or not.
But let\'s still hope.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello, there! Jessie.
>> Hello there Jessie!
DId you have a wonderful holiday?
>> Correct!
>> Did you have a wonderful holiday?
I did actually.
>> Correct!
I\'ll tell you about this in talking.
>> I\'ll tell you about this in our class.
But I want you to tell me about yours too.
>> Correct!
Let\'s see soon!
>> I\'ll see you soon!
OR>> Let\'s see each other soon!
<Essay>
We, koreans should abandon the discrimination for foreigners.
>> We, Koreans should abandon discriminating foreigners.
Although foreigners has been appearing in the show on TV, but many people still absolutely have a bad thought about them.
>> Although foreigners have been appearing on television shows, many people still absolutely have a bad thought about them.
Of course I can\'t say that I have nothing...
>> Correct!
But anyway we need to change our stereotypes at least we\'re living in the international era.
>> Do you mean: But anyway we need to change our stereotypes since we\'re living in the international era.
Thanks for sharing this.
I do hope it will change.
Though I think it would be hard since we cannot dictate what a person should change or not.
But let\'s still hope.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello, there! Jessie.
>> Hello there Jessie!
DId you have a wonderful holiday?
>> Correct!
>> Did you have a wonderful holiday?
I did actually.
>> Correct!
I\'ll tell you about this in talking.
>> I\'ll tell you about this in our class.
But I want you to tell me about yours too.
>> Correct!
Let\'s see soon!
>> I\'ll see you soon!
OR>> Let\'s see each other soon!
<Essay>
We, koreans should abandon the discrimination for foreigners.
>> We, Koreans should abandon discriminating foreigners.
Although foreigners has been appearing in the show on TV, but many people still absolutely have a bad thought about them.
>> Although foreigners have been appearing on television shows, many people still absolutely have a bad thought about them.
Of course I can\'t say that I have nothing...
>> Correct!
But anyway we need to change our stereotypes at least we\'re living in the international era.
>> Do you mean: But anyway we need to change our stereotypes since we\'re living in the international era.
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