Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the best way to be financially stable is to make a financial plan in a monthly and yearly basis.
When we make a financial plan, we can set a long-term goal, like how much money we want to save during a year.
Then, we can try not to waste money and put aside a part of our salary for a rainy day.
And one of the good way to control our finance is to keep an account book ourselves.
Because we cannot memorize all the money we spent, keeping an account book helps us to keep track of our expenses.
강사 첨삭
Hello there my student Ms [이름]!
Finally it\'s Friday! What a wonderful evening right? :)
I hope you enjoyed the holiday yesterday! :)
So, before we end the week, I hope you can remember all the pieces of advice that I gave you this week.
Do not pressure yourself too much but take time to study and enjoy English at the same time. :)
Take care always and see you on Monday!! :)
Caring,
Teacher Myra
I think the best way to be financially stable is to make a financial plan in a monthly and yearly basis.
>>CORRECT
OR>> In my perspective, the best way to be financially stable is to make a financial plan on a regular basis.
When we make a financial plan, we can set a long-term goal, like how much money we want to save during a year.
>>CORRECT
Then, we can try not to waste money and put aside a part of our salary for a rainy day.
>>CORRECT
OR>> With this, we won\'t waste money and set aside some amount of money for emergency purposes.
And one of the good way to control our finance is to keep an account book ourselves.
>>And one of the good ways to control our finance is to keep an account book for ourselves.
Because we cannot memorize all the money we spent, keeping an account book helps us to keep track of our expenses.
>>CORRECT
Finally it\'s Friday! What a wonderful evening right? :)
I hope you enjoyed the holiday yesterday! :)
So, before we end the week, I hope you can remember all the pieces of advice that I gave you this week.
Do not pressure yourself too much but take time to study and enjoy English at the same time. :)
Take care always and see you on Monday!! :)
Caring,
Teacher Myra
I think the best way to be financially stable is to make a financial plan in a monthly and yearly basis.
>>CORRECT
OR>> In my perspective, the best way to be financially stable is to make a financial plan on a regular basis.
When we make a financial plan, we can set a long-term goal, like how much money we want to save during a year.
>>CORRECT
Then, we can try not to waste money and put aside a part of our salary for a rainy day.
>>CORRECT
OR>> With this, we won\'t waste money and set aside some amount of money for emergency purposes.
And one of the good way to control our finance is to keep an account book ourselves.
>>And one of the good ways to control our finance is to keep an account book for ourselves.
Because we cannot memorize all the money we spent, keeping an account book helps us to keep track of our expenses.
>>CORRECT
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