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What things can either men or women do that the other cannot do and why? Before I make some my opinions, We must know men and women have some difference features each other.Commonly, most of the men were more stronger than women.This is a fact which anyone couldn't refute.I belived this differnce features makes some thoughts like only men to do or only women to do. Furthermore, In traditional korea, Our ancestor had forbidden men to come in the kicten.They had divided things into men things and women things. And then this custom have remained a certain extent until now. For these reasons, There were lots of sex discriminations in our mind. For example, when I was young, We can't think women drive the car in highway. Our thoughts is that women must be house. Even we can't belive the men play with girl in the playground. I can't more exactly example about sex discriminations but it is not nowadays. I have grown as I have felt this custom slowly disappear.so In these day,there are no!

Hi [이름]! Excellent composition! I mean the content is really exceptional. It came from your prior experiences, observation and facts that you probably read. It was very informative. I love love it! Please just go over my corrections. Thanks again! Teacher Lexi What things can either men or women do that the other cannot do and why?Before I make some my opinions, We must know men and women have some difference features each other. >>Before I give my opinions, I think we all know that men and women have differences in their features. Commonly, most of the men were more stronger than women. >>Commonly, most men arestronger than women. This is a fact which anyone couldn\'t refute. >>Correct! I belived this differnce features makes some thoughts like only men to do or only women to do. >>I believe this difference in features is the basis of some thoughts about what can men or women do. Furthermore, In traditional korea, Our ancestor had forbidden men to come in the kicten. >>Correct (no need to capitalize~ in, our) (Capitalization~ Korea) (Spelling check- kitchen) They had divided things into men things and women things. >>This tradition divided things/stuff into men only or women only. And then this custom have remained a certain extent until now. >>Correct! Excellent! :) For these reasons, There were lots of sex discriminations in our mind. >>Correct For example, when I was young, We can\'t think women drive the car in highway. >>For women, when I was young, we thought that women can\'t/shouldn\'t drive a car in the highway. Our thoughts is that women must be house. >>Our thought is that women must stay in the house. Even we can\'t belive the men play with girl in the playground. >>Also, boys shouldn\'t be playing with girls in the playground. I can\'t more exactly example about sex discriminations but it is not nowadays. >>I can\'t think of other examples about sex discrimination but it\'s still going on nowadays. I have grown as I have felt this custom slowly disappear.so In these day,there are no! >>I felt as I have grown that this custom is slowly disappearing so these days, there are not that much.