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What is the best way to be financially stable?
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First of all, I want to advise to make a bankbook from childhood.
If a child has a bankbook, I believe he will feel funny to see increased balance regardless of its amount and more to the point, he can have a economic/financial sense and he will get used to a habit of saving.
I think this is the most important and afterward being financially stable depends on how soon he makes a seed money.
Next step is diversified invest with a seed money such as stock, pension, etc.
This is the best way to be financially stable I think.
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Hello there my student Mr. [이름]!
Finally it\'s Friday! What a wonderful evening right? :)
I hope you enjoyed the holiday yesterday! :)
So, before we end the week, I hope you can remember all the pieces of advice that I gave you this week.
Do not pressure yourself too much but take time to study and enjoy English at the same time. :)
Take care always and see you on Monday!! :)
Caring,
Teacher Myra
What is the best way to be financially stable?
First of all, I want to advise to make a bankbook from childhood.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I want to advise all people to make a bankbook from their childhood until they grow old.
If a child has a bankbook, I believe he will feel funny to see increased balance regardless of its amount and more to the point, he can have a economic/financial sense >>If a child has a bankbook, I believe he will feel delighted to see increase in his balance, regardless of its amount and moreover, he can have an economic/financial sense or knowledge
and he will get used to a habit of saving.
>>and he will get used to the habit of saving.
I think this is the most important and afterward being financially stable depends on how soon he makes a seed money.
>>I think this is the most important thing, and afterwards, it will depend on how soon he makes a seed money.
Next step is diversified invest with a seed money such as stock, pension, etc.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Then he can use that seed money and invest in different ways such as stock, pension, etc.
This is the best way to be financially stable I think.
>>CORRECT
Finally it\'s Friday! What a wonderful evening right? :)
I hope you enjoyed the holiday yesterday! :)
So, before we end the week, I hope you can remember all the pieces of advice that I gave you this week.
Do not pressure yourself too much but take time to study and enjoy English at the same time. :)
Take care always and see you on Monday!! :)
Caring,
Teacher Myra
What is the best way to be financially stable?
First of all, I want to advise to make a bankbook from childhood.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I want to advise all people to make a bankbook from their childhood until they grow old.
If a child has a bankbook, I believe he will feel funny to see increased balance regardless of its amount and more to the point, he can have a economic/financial sense >>If a child has a bankbook, I believe he will feel delighted to see increase in his balance, regardless of its amount and moreover, he can have an economic/financial sense or knowledge
and he will get used to a habit of saving.
>>and he will get used to the habit of saving.
I think this is the most important and afterward being financially stable depends on how soon he makes a seed money.
>>I think this is the most important thing, and afterwards, it will depend on how soon he makes a seed money.
Next step is diversified invest with a seed money such as stock, pension, etc.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Then he can use that seed money and invest in different ways such as stock, pension, etc.
This is the best way to be financially stable I think.
>>CORRECT
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