Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher Nina :) This is my homework for a long time!
Weekend begins again and there is no class again :(
I miss our class and your laughter.
You have a strength to make other people happy.
Because of it, I always wait for our class.
You gave me the topic 'Do you schedule out what you have to do every week? Do you make a schedule for every day? Why/ Why not?'
I make out a schedule for everyday.
I have a diary and always carry it. It has daily parts and calendars.
When what I have to do arises, I write it in my diary instantly not to forget it.
After I finish what I have to do, I draw a line on the memo.
At that time, I feel a sense of kind of satisfaction.
For a short time in past, I replaced my diary with one of cellphone and often forgot to check the list.
So I replaced back again.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
A happy day to you! ^_^ How are you?
Are you having a great time?
Are you having a great time?
Thanks for your compliment. I am more inspired to work.
You\'re one of the best students I have.
I hope that you are having a great time studying with me. ^_^
Anyway. it is really important to keep track of the things we have to do.
In that way, we will remember everything. Thanks for your composition today.
Have a great weekend. ^^
Teacher Nina
>> Correct!
This is my homework for a long time!
>> Correct!
>> OR: This is my homework that I wasn\'t able to do for a long time. ^^
Weekend begins again and there is no class again :(
Weekend begins again and there is no class again :(
>> Correct!
I miss our class and your laughter.
I miss our class and your laughter.
>> Correct!
You have a strength to make other people happy.
You have a strength to make other people happy.
>> You have the strength to make other people happy.
Because of it, I always wait for our class.
Because of it, I always wait for our class.
>> Correct!
You gave me the topic \'Do you schedule out what you have to do every week? Do you make a schedule for every day? Why/ Why not?\'
You gave me the topic \'Do you schedule out what you have to do every week? Do you make a schedule for every day? Why/ Why not?\'
>> Correct!
I make out a schedule for everyday.
I make out a schedule for everyday.
>> I make a schedule everyday.
>> OR: I always plan what to do everyday.
I have a diary and always carry it.
I have a diary and always carry it.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I have a diary and always keep it handy.
It has daily parts and calendars.
>> Correct!
When what I have to do arises, I write it in my diary instantly not to forget it.
When what I have to do arises, I write it in my diary instantly not to forget it.
>> When the things I have to do arises, I write it in my diary immediately in order for me not to forget it.
>> OR: When the things I have to do arises, I immediately write it so that I won\'t forget it.
After I finish what I have to do, I draw a line on the memo.
After I finish what I have to do, I draw a line on the memo.
>> Correct!
>> OR: When I\'m done with it, I draw a line on the memo.
At that time, I feel a sense of kind of satisfaction.
At that time, I feel a sense of kind of satisfaction.
>> Correct!
>> OR: At that time, I feel satisfied.
For a short time in past, I replaced my diary with one of cellphone and often forgot to check the list.
For a short time in past, I replaced my diary with one of cellphone and often forgot to check the list.
>> For the past few days, I replaced my diary with one of my cellphones and often forget to check the list.
>> OR: For the past few days, I replaced my diary with one of my mobile phones and I often forget to check it.
So I replaced back again.
>> OR: For the past few days, I replaced my diary with one of my mobile phones and I often forget to check it.
So I replaced back again.
>> So I replaced it again.
>> OR: So, I used my diary again.
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