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2014-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Good evening teacher Nina! Actually it's second greeting. I did almost homework and clicked 'back button' by mistake....ah.. I couldn't belilve the situation and until nIow I can't believe it. :( Well, you know what? When I accessed the Power English site in order to do rest of my homework, I was surprised that you gave me corrections to my last homework! I thought that you were already out of work because it was over 1o'clock in the morning (of course in here). And I heard that here is one hour faster than there. So when I uploaded last homework, It was well after midnight in there, I think. It's too late time to work. What time do you leave your work? I hope that It's not that you always work over midnight. It might affect your insomnia. I'm worried about that. Oh, although it's second time that I wrote the story about your corrections from late night, the story is longer that the first. So I have to do homework in next writing. Can you understand me? I will do soon.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Oh my god! You\'re so sweet!
Thanks for your concern. ^^
I leave the office at midnight. 
Actually, I also check my students\' homework even on weekends.
It is because I know that they are willing to learn. ^^
I\'m sorry to hear about what happened earlier. Thanks for your effort. 
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina

Good evening teacher Nina!
>> CORRECT! 
Actually it\'s second greeting.
>> Actually it\'s my second greeting. 
I did almost homework and clicked \'back button\' by mistake....ah..
>> I almost finished all of my homework but I clicked back button by mistake.
I couldn\'t belilve the situation and until nIow I can\'t believe it. :(
>> I couldn\'t believe what happened until now.

Well, you know what?
>> CORRECT! 
When I accessed the Power English site in order to do rest of my homework, I was surprised that you gave me corrections to my last homework!
>> When I accessed Power English website in order to do the rest of my homework, I was surprised that you gave me correction on my last homework. 
I thought that you were already out of work because it was over 1o\'clock in the morning (of course in here).
>> I thought that you were already out of work because it was already passed one o\'clock in the morning here in Korea. 
And I heard that here is one hour faster than there.
>> And I heard that Korea is one hour ahead than the Philippines/ 
So when I uploaded last homework, It was well after midnight in there, I think.
>> So, when I uploaded my last homework I think it was already passed midnight there. 
It\'s too late time to work.
>> It\'s too late to work.
What time do you leave your work?
>> CORRECT! 
I hope that It\'s not that you always work over midnight.
>> I hope that you don\'t work until passed midnight. 
It might affect your insomnia. 
>> CORRECT! 
I\'m worried about that.
>> CORRECT! 

Oh, although it\'s second time that I wrote the story about your corrections from late night, the story is longer that the first.
>> Did you mean: Oh, although it\'s second time that I wrote the story about your corrections from last night, the story is longer that the first.
So I have to do homework in next writing. 
>> So, I have to do my homework in my next composition. 
Can you understand me?
>> CORRECT! 
I will do soon.
>> CORRECT! 

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