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2014-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Good evening! :) This is today's third homework. 1. My mother likes chocolate, but she doesn't like biscuits. 2. What do the children wear at your school? 3. Lynn's father watches badminton on TV, but he doesn't watch judo. 4. Where do the Masons buy their fruit? 5. Does the cat like to sleep on the sofa? 6. Dogs love bones, but they don't love cheese. 7. Where do Sam and Ben hide their CDs? 8. We eat pizza, but we don't eat hamburgers. 9. Does Mrs. [Name] read magazines? 10. Do the boys play cricket outside? When our class was finished and few minutes later, I chenked today's review. Sometimes I get 3 level in some part but usaully I get 4 level. By the way, recently I got occasionally 5 level! I was very very surprised. I feel that I'm more comportable during the class than before. But I don't know well that I have improved. I think it's not that I can make sentences more structural than first. Of course it's just about a month to start to talk to you. I have to keep it up :)

강사 첨삭

A perfect homework [이름]!
Yahoo! The homework was easy for you. ^_^
Of course, there are really areas that you shine.
You have to work on your weaknesses more.
I am glad that you check my feedback. ^^
I encourage you to share more ideas in class.
Don\'t be scared to commit mistakes.
Let us reach your goal. ^^ I know you can do it. 
I am here to guide you. Just be patient. ^^
Teacher Nina

Good evening! :)
>> Correct! 
This is today\'s third homework.
>> This is my third homework today. 

1. My mother likes chocolate, but she doesn\'t like biscuits.
>> Correct! 
2. What do the children wear at your school?
>> Correct! 
3. Lynn\'s father watches badminton on TV, but he doesn\'t watch judo.
>> Correct! 
4. Where do the Masons buy their fruit?
>> Correct! 
5. Does the cat like to sleep on the sofa?
>> Correct! 
6. Dogs love bones, but they don\'t love cheese.
>> Correct! 
7. Where do Sam and Ben hide their CDs?
>> Correct! 
8. We eat pizza, but we don\'t eat hamburgers.
>> Correct! 
9. Does Mrs. [Name] read magazines?
>> Correct! 
10. Do the boys play cricket outside?
>> Correct! 

When our class was finished and few minutes later, I chenked today\'s review.
>> When our class was finishes few minutes later, I checked today\'s feedback. 
Sometimes I get 3 level in some part but usaully I get 4 level.
>> Sometimes I get level three in some part but I usually get level four.
By the way, recently I got occasionally 5 level!
>> By the way, I recently got level five.
I was very very surprised.
>> Correct! 
I feel that I\'m more comportable during the class than before.
>> I feel that I\'m more comfortable during our class these days than before. 
>> OR: I feel that I am more comfortable now in class than before. 
But I don\'t know well that I have improved.
>> But I don\'t know well if I have improved my skills. 
I think it\'s not that I can make sentences more structural than first.
>> I think it\'s not that I can make more structured sentences now than before. 
Of course it\'s just about a month to start to talk to you.
>> Of course, it\'s just about a month since I started talking to you. 
I have to keep it up :)
>> Correct! 

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