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2011-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

1. When I was young , I tried to follow the dreams my parents want. On a second thought, following my own dreams is more important. 2. When I was a high school student, my best friend planned for my birthday. But she was here with me all day. So I didn't smell anything! In the end, I was so amazed. 3. Sometimes, clerks are make mistakes. I think counting change is a good habit. But I usually use a check card. So I don't have a chance to get change.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름],             How are you doing? Thank you for this composition. I wish that you are going to have a great weekend. See you on Monday! -Verna- 1. When I was young , I tried to follow the dreams my parents want. On a second thought, following my own dreams is more important.>>When I was young , I tried to follow the dreams my parents want for me on a second thought, following my own dreams is more important.2. When I was a high school student, my best friend planned for my birthday. But she was here with me all day. So I didn't smell anything! In the end, I was so amazed.>>When I was a high school student, my best friend planned for my birthday. But she was here with me all day. So I didn't smell anything! In the end, I was so amazed with what happened. (What amazed you?)3. Sometimes, clerks are make mistakes. I think counting change is a good habit. But I usually use a check card. So I don't have a chance to get change. >> Sometimes, clerks make mistakes. I think counting change is a good habit. But I usually use a check card. So I don't have a chance to get change.

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