Homework
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Last homework!
First of all, thank you for checking my homework.
Because I didn't homework everyday, you checked them at once.
I'm sorry for that.
And thank you for saying thank you for doing homework.
It's what I have to do for me.
But you always encourage me. I'm very appriciated.
The topic you gave me was "What affects the level of your happiness?"
Like other people, I feel happy when I eat something delicious, meet friends, go somewhere nice and so on.
But there is a factor that much affects my happiness.
Before I wrote in homework, I have a troble with maintaining balance with sleeping and doing what I want to do in limited time.
So, actually I feel biggest happiness when I maintain balance well.
When I wake up in early morning, do what I have to do and what I want to do during day everyday, I'm sooooo much happy.
Happiness that I feel when I accomplish what I really wish is best, I think.
It's a best feeling I've feeled ever.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much, [이름]!
I appreciate that you did all of your homework.
It\'s nice that you are really focused with the things you should do.
I am sure that you will be able to accomplish all of those because of your wonderful attitude.
Keep it up! Don\'t ever give up!
Keep it up! Don\'t ever give up!
Talk to you soon. Have a great weekend.
Take Care!
Teacher Nina
>> Correct!
First of all, thank you for checking my homework.
First of all, thank you for checking my homework.
>> Correct!
Because I didn\'t homework everyday, you checked them at once.
Because I didn\'t homework everyday, you checked them at once.
>> Because I don\'t do my homework everyday but you check it immediately.
I\'m sorry for that.
I\'m sorry for that.
>> Correct!
And thank you for saying thank you for doing homework.
And thank you for saying thank you for doing homework.
>> And thank you for saying, \"Thank you for doing your homework.\"
It\'s what I have to do for me.
>> Did you mean: It\'s what I have to do for myself.
But you always encourage me.
But you always encourage me.
>> Correct!
I\'m very appriciated.
>> I really appreciate it.
The topic you gave me was \"What affects the level of your happiness?\"
Like other people, I feel happy when I eat something delicious, meet friends, go somewhere nice and so on.
The topic you gave me was \"What affects the level of your happiness?\"
Like other people, I feel happy when I eat something delicious, meet friends, go somewhere nice and so on.
>> Correct!
But there is a factor that much affects my happiness.
But there is a factor that much affects my happiness.
>> But there is something that really affects my happiness.
Before I wrote in homework, I have a troble with maintaining balance with sleeping and doing what I want to do in limited time.
Before I wrote in homework, I have a troble with maintaining balance with sleeping and doing what I want to do in limited time.
>> I wrote it in my previous homework. I have trouble maintaining balance with sleeping and doing things that I want to do in a limited time.
So, actually I feel biggest happiness when I maintain balance well.
So, actually I feel biggest happiness when I maintain balance well.
>> So, I really feel happy when I balance it well.
>> OR: So, I really feel happy when I was able to balance those things.
>> OR: So, I really feel happy when I was able to manage those things within a limited time.
When I wake up in early morning, do what I have to do and what I want to do during day everyday, I\'m sooooo much happy.
When I wake up in early morning, do what I have to do and what I want to do during day everyday, I\'m sooooo much happy.
>> When I wake up early, do the things that I have to do during the day then I feel so happy.
>> OR: If I wake up early, do the things that are needed to be done then I feel so happy.
Happiness that I feel when I accomplish what I really wish is best, I think.
Happiness that I feel when I accomplish what I really wish is best, I think.
>> I think the happiness I feel when I accomplished what I really want is the best.
It\'s a best feeling I\'ve feeled ever.
It\'s a best feeling I\'ve feeled ever.
>> It\'s the best feeling I ever feel.
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