homework
학생이 쓴 원문
*ESSAY: Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The way I see it, learning about the past is a very important thing for human.
We can learn wisdom about life through the experience of the past.
The past is the part of the present, and we can’t survive without looking back on our past.
If human neglected the history, we wouldn’t be able to advance and developed.
Nowadays, students aren’t interested in learning history, and they don’t even know how important history is for human.
I think adults are encouraging this kind of phenomenon.
The adults need to change this trend by emphasizing the importance of learning history.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Monday! ^^
I am glad to read and check your composition once more.
I am happy that you are not getting lazy at making your homework.
Keep it up! ^^
I just observed that you don\'t usually use Articles when it is needed.
In relation to that, please have a research about Articles.
You will have a better composition when you so it.
One more thing, there is a problem with your apostrophes.
Just like the word can\'t.
I just see it as \"can plus a small line before the letter t\".
There might be a problem on your computer.
However, as a whole, you did really great! ^^
Anyway, see you very soon! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
The way I see it, learning about the past is a very important thing for human. >> The way I see it, learning about the past is a very important thing for a human.
>> OR: The way I see it, learning about the past is a very important thing for humans.
We can learn wisdom about life through the experience of the past. >> We can learn wisdom about life through the experience from the past.
>> OR: We can learn wisdom about life through our experiences from the past.
>> OR: We can learn wisdom about life through our past experiences.
The past is the part of the present, and we can’t survive without looking back on our past. >> The past is the pasrt of the present, and we can\'t survive without looking back on our past.
If human neglected the history, we wouldn’t be able to advance and developed. >> If human neglected history, we wouldn\'t be able to advance and develop.
Nowadays, students aren’t interested in learning history, and they don’t even know how important history is for human. >> Nowadays, students aren\'t interested in learning history, and they don\'t even know how important history is for humans.
I think adults are encouraging this kind of phenomenon. >> CORRECT!
The adults need to change this trend by emphasizing the importance of learning history.
>> CORRECT!
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