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Hello [이름],

I hope that you could buy a house so that you can visit your parents often.

I commend you for using capital letters on the first word the the sentence. it means you are listening to the instructions. Keep it up!!!

Have a great day!!!!

T. Jeny

I want a car.

>>correct
I live in seoul, but my parent live in Countryside

>>I live in Seould but my parents live in the countryside.
My parents always miss me. but sometime I went to the hometown.

>>My parents always miss me, but sometimes, I go to my hometown.
I think if I have a car, I will go to the home more time.

>>I think, if I have a car, I will go home often.
I think that when i go to hometown better than when i give a gift.

>>I think, it\'s better go home than give a gift.