homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kris.
How was your weekend?
I met my father-in-law with my family.
My family spent a enjoyable time with my father-in-law.
Here is my homework.
I am worried my future.
I want to live a comfortable in my future.
But I can't save a money for my future because I want to learn my children for their future.
So I have to spend the money for my children.
Also I can't work a long time because I am old woman.
So, I don't have enough time to save the money for my future.
That's why I am warried my future.
See you later.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Well, please don\'t worry too much about your future.
You have your children and they are your first priority.
In the future, if your children will be successful, they can actually
help you. They will give you what you want.
One more thing, if your children will be successful then that would be
your greatest success and achievement in life. So, take care of your children
and don\'t stress yourself too much.
Take care always.
~~Teacher Kris
How was your weekend?
>> Correct
I met my father-in-law with my family.
I met my father-in-law with my family.
>> My family and I went to see my father-in-law.
My family spent a enjoyable time with my father-in-law.
My family spent a enjoyable time with my father-in-law.
>> My family spent an enjoyable time with my mother-in-law.
Here is my homework.
Here is my homework.
I am worried my future.
>> I am worried about my future.
I want to live a comfortable in my future.
I want to live a comfortable in my future.
>> I want to live a comfortable life in the future.
But I can\'t save a money for my future because I want to learn my children for their future.
But I can\'t save a money for my future because I want to learn my children for their future.
>> But, I couldn\'t be able to save money for my future because my first priority are my children and I am concerned about their future,
So I have to spend the money for my children.
So I have to spend the money for my children.
>>So, I have to spend the money for my children.
Also I can\'t work a long time because I am old woman.
Also I can\'t work a long time because I am old woman.
>> Also, I can\'t work for a long period of time because I am already old.
So, I don\'t have enough time to save the money for my future.
So, I don\'t have enough time to save the money for my future.
>> So, I don\'t have enough time to save money for my future.
That\'s why I am warried my future.
That\'s why I am warried my future.
>> That\'s why I am worried about my future.
See you later.^^
See you later.^^
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