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Hello Brandon ^^
A wonderful day to you! It's nice to meet you and I had a great time talking to you as well. By the way, I know that your previous Teacher Reina understands your decision about the sudden change of schedule. ^^
On the other hand, congratulations and it's good to know that your resume passed the qualification of the company you are applying. I think it is your first step to your goal. This is to work in an English speaking environment. ^^
There is no need to worry about your fluency in speaking the English language because in time I know you can be better. I know this won't be as fast as the wind but let us help each other for you to be better. Please don't lose hope and keep believing in yourself that you can do it. ^^
One easy tip I can give you is that try to read English books on your free time. In that way you can familiarize yourself with English words to enhance your vocabulary. As well as you can practice pronouncing it and of course you can use them in your sentences. ^^
See you in class Brandon ^^
-Teacher Lora
Hi Lora~! My new English teacher.
>> Hi Lora! My new English Teacher.
It was good time to have a conversation with you last friday.
>> It was a good time to have a conversation with you last Friday.
I just feel a little sorry to my ex-teacher Reina, because I didn\'t discuss with her about the change of my schedule.
>> I just felt a little sorry to my previous Teacher Reina because I didn't discuss with her about the change of my schedule.
OR:
>> I felt sorry to my previous Teacher because I didn't inform her about the change of my schedule.
I believe she understand me.
>> I believe she understands me.
Last week I got an e-mail that my resume passed.
>> Last week I got an e-mail saying that my resume passed.
In fact, I didn\'t worry about my resume or my career, I just worry about my English.
>> In fact, I didn't worry about my resume or my career; I am worried about my English skill.
I have relatively long work experience, but the company I willing to enter requires me fluent English.
>> I have relatively long work experience, but the company I am willing to enter requires me to be fluent in English.
They want my English to be enough to engage in a business meeting or a conference call.
>> They want my English skill to be better for me to engage in business meeting or a conference call.
I think it is nearly impossible to improve my English to such a level in such a short period of time.
>> I think it is nearly impossible to improve my English into such level in a short period of time.
I really worry about that.
>> I am really worried about that.
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