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2014-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Good evening! During today's class, I can't concentrate because I'm working in library so I had to go out in order to take a class. By the way, the weather was really cold and windy suddenly so I was so cold T.T I'm sorry for that. I have to search for a suitable place to take a class. Maybe summer was gone. I'll pull autumn and winter wears tonight. How was weather in the Philippines todays? I wonder it :) Anyway, This topic is "When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?" Well, I'm embarrassed to say it. Actually when I was a child, my dream was to be a singer. I so much liked singing a song when I was a child. And sometimes I received a prize for song contests. But my dream was changed. Of course I like it now, but it isn't as much as I did in past. Now I want to sing a song as a hobby not a job. Although I study electronic engineering, I want to be a mathematician. So I will study mathematic more in other university after I graduate.

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Good day to you [이름]! Oh! No worries about that! It is okay, the important thing for me is that you took the class. ^_^ Please keep yourself warm to avoid getting sick. Really? You wanted to be a singer? Oh my god. I think I should hear your golden voice in class. HIhihihi. Just kidding. ^_^ Whatever dreams we have, we should always do your best to achieve it. I know you will. Talk to you tomorrow.Good night. Thank you for doing your homework today. Take Care! Teacher Nina   Good evening! >> CORRECT!During today\'s class, I can\'t concentrate because I\'m working in library so I had to go out in order to take a class. >> Today, I can\'t concentrate because I was working in the library so, I had to go out in order to take our class. By the way, the weather was really cold and windy suddenly so I was so cold T.T >> By the way, the weather is really cold and windy so I suddenly feel cold. >> OR: By the way, the weather was really cold and winy so I suddenly felt cold. I\'m sorry for that. >> CORRECT! I have to search for a suitable place to take a class. >> I have to look for a good place to take our class. >> OR: I have to look for a place to take our class. Maybe summer was gone. >> Maybe summer season is gone. I\'ll pull autumn and winter wears tonight. >> I\'ll pull out autumn and winter clothes tonight. >> OR: I\'ll prepare autumn and winter clothes tonight. How was weather in the Philippines todays? >> How\'s the weather in the Philippines today?>> OR: How\'s the weather in the Philippines these days?I wonder it :) >> I am wondering about it. Anyway, This topic is \"When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?\"Well, I\'m embarrassed to say it. >> Well, I\'m embarrassed to say this. Actually when I was a child, my dream was to be a singer. >> CORRECT!I so much liked singing a song when I was a child. >> I really liked singing when I was a child. And sometimes I received a prize for song contests. >> And there were times that I received a prize in competitions. >> OR: And ther were times that I received a prize in a singing competition.  But my dream was changed. >> But my dream changed. Of course I like it now, but it isn\'t as much as I did in past. >> Of course, I like it now but it isn\'t as much as I did in the past. Now I want to sing a song as a hobby not a job. >> Now, I want to sing as a hobby not a job. Although I study electronic engineering, I want to be a mathematician. >> Although, I studied Electronic Enginerring, I want to be a Mathematician. So I will study mathematic more in other university after I graduate. >> So, I will study Mathematics more in another university after I graduate.

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