Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening!
During today's class, I can't concentrate because I'm working in library so I had to go out in order to take a class. By the way, the weather was really cold and windy suddenly so I was so cold T.T
I'm sorry for that. I have to search for a suitable place to take a class.
Maybe summer was gone. I'll pull autumn and winter wears tonight.
How was weather in the Philippines todays?
I wonder it :)
Anyway, This topic is "When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?"
Well, I'm embarrassed to say it. Actually when I was a child, my dream was to be a singer.
I so much liked singing a song when I was a child. And sometimes I received a prize for song contests.
But my dream was changed. Of course I like it now, but it isn't as much as I did in past. Now I want to sing a song as a hobby not a job.
Although I study electronic engineering, I want to be a mathematician.
So I will study mathematic more in other university after I graduate.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you [이름]!
Oh! No worries about that!
It is okay, the important thing for me is that you took the class. ^_^
Please keep yourself warm to avoid getting sick.
Really? You wanted to be a singer?
Oh my god. I think I should hear your golden voice in class. HIhihihi. Just kidding. ^_^
Whatever dreams we have, we should always do your best to achieve it.
I know you will. Talk to you tomorrow.Good night. Thank you for doing your homework today.
Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Good evening!
>> CORRECT!During today\'s class, I can\'t concentrate because I\'m working in library so I had to go out in order to take a class.
>> Today, I can\'t concentrate because I was working in the library so, I had to go out in order to take our class.
By the way, the weather was really cold and windy suddenly so I was so cold T.T
>> By the way, the weather is really cold and windy so I suddenly feel cold.
>> OR: By the way, the weather was really cold and winy so I suddenly felt cold. I\'m sorry for that.
>> CORRECT!
I have to search for a suitable place to take a class.
>> I have to look for a good place to take our class.
>> OR: I have to look for a place to take our class. Maybe summer was gone.
>> Maybe summer season is gone.
I\'ll pull autumn and winter wears tonight.
>> I\'ll pull out autumn and winter clothes tonight.
>> OR: I\'ll prepare autumn and winter clothes tonight. How was weather in the Philippines todays?
>> How\'s the weather in the Philippines today?>> OR: How\'s the weather in the Philippines these days?I wonder it :)
>> I am wondering about it. Anyway, This topic is \"When you were a child, what was your dream for the future? Has it changed?\"Well, I\'m embarrassed to say it.
>> Well, I\'m embarrassed to say this.
Actually when I was a child, my dream was to be a singer.
>> CORRECT!I so much liked singing a song when I was a child.
>> I really liked singing when I was a child.
And sometimes I received a prize for song contests.
>> And there were times that I received a prize in competitions.
>> OR: And ther were times that I received a prize in a singing competition. But my dream was changed.
>> But my dream changed.
Of course I like it now, but it isn\'t as much as I did in past.
>> Of course, I like it now but it isn\'t as much as I did in the past.
Now I want to sing a song as a hobby not a job.
>> Now, I want to sing as a hobby not a job. Although I study electronic engineering, I want to be a mathematician.
>> Although, I studied Electronic Enginerring, I want to be a Mathematician. So I will study mathematic more in other university after I graduate.
>> So, I will study Mathematics more in another university after I graduate.
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