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Would you ever consider living permanently in a different country? Why or why not? I would like to live in a different country permanently, even though I like my country. I was born in Korea. My family and friends live in Korea. However, it would be great if I live in a different country. South Korea is too competive to have time for rest. Our time goes so fast, we have too many things to do in Korea. So if I live in the other country it will be more pleasure to have rest time. Someplace that we don't have to compete and have a rest. Moreover, It will be fun to learn new culture. If we live in a different country, we will meet new neighborhood, and we will learn there culture. Diffrent culture has many interesting things that I don't know. So, I want to live permanently in a different country.

Hello [이름]!Thank you for sharing your thoughts about livng permanently in other countries. Anyway, kindly go over my corrections. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ Would you ever consider living permanently in a different country? Why or why not?I would like to live in a different country permanently, even though I like my country. >> Correct. I was born in Korea. >> Correct. My family and friends live in Korea. >> Correct. However, it would be great if I live in a different country. >> Correct. South Korea is too competive to have time for rest. >> Correct. Our time goes so fast, we have too many things to do in Korea. >> Correct. So if I live in the other country it will be more pleasure to have rest time. >> So if I live in another country, it would be more pleasant to have a rest time. Someplace that we don\'t have to compete and have a rest. >> In a place where we don\'t have to compete and have a rest. Moreover, It will be fun to learn new culture. >> Moreover, It would be fun to learn a new culture. If we live in a different country, we will meet new neighborhood, and we will learn there culture. >> If we live in a different country, we can meet new neighbors, and learn their culture. Diffrent culture has many interesting things that I don\'t know. >> There are many interesting things to know from other cultures. So, I want to live permanently in a different country. >> Correct.