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Diagree Because the chrildren should play in the wood. Big city has hospital, good traffic, many kind of stuff..... However the Big city has many dusty. And that dusty will hurt chrildren.

Hi there [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering the composition writing topic. ^^ You expressed your opinion well but the sentence structures needed a lot of revision to make it more comprehensive. Observe how your sentences are rephrased. I know you can do better. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   Diagree Because the chrildren should play in the wood. >> I agree that children should grow up in the countryside because children should be able to play in the woods.Big city has hospital, good traffic, many kind of stuff..... >> Large cities have their benefits like hospitals, good traffic such as public transportation and many more.However the Big city has many dusty. And that dusty will hurt chrildren. >> However, cities are heavily polluted and the poluution will hurt the health of children.