HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you do to help the poor?
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To be honest, I didn't help the poor regularly.
Instead I have helped them on a special day such as Christmas or during special community chest which is for vitims damaged by natural disaster like typoon.
In the meantime, while I'm doing my homework, I think I will look back and help them normally.
강사 첨삭
Hello MR. [이름]! :)
Happy Tuesday!
What happened to you last night? You put our class on hold so I hope everything\'s okay with you...
All is well! :)
Thanks for doing your homework even if you have a hectic schedule. :)
I do hope that this homework serves as an eye-opener for you.
I hope you can help more people! :)
Keep on improving Iron Man! kkkk ^_~
Take care and I\'ll hear from you on Wednesday!
Teacher Myra~~
What would you do to help the poor?
To be honest, I didn\'t help the poor regularly.
>>To be honest, I don\'t help the poor regularly.
Instead I have helped them on a special day such as Christmas or during special community chest which is for vitims damaged by natural disaster like typoon.
>>Instead, I have helped them on special days such as Christmas or during special community chest which is for the victims of natural disasters like typhoon.
In the meantime, while I\'m doing my homework, I think I will look back and help them normally.
>>CORRECT
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