homework

*Essay: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Nowadays needless to say, there is plentiful information for people to learn all over. This kind of situation is not only helpful for people. We are living in a flood of information, and we need to be more careful in accepting information. We have to develop our abilities to tell which one is a useful thing for us. To do that, we need to tighten the censorship more than before and fight against the spread of false information. Now what our adults have to do is that our students don’t be exposed to the harmful contents.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Wednesday! ^^   Awesome! ^^ You made a fantastic composition, especially that you got few corrections in doing it. I can also say that you thought very deeply while writing your homework. Indeed, it is a great job! ^^ I\'m very happy! ^^.   Just, you need to be careful with the punctuation marks that you use and need to use. You also need to still work out on your sentence structure.   Anyway, as a whole, you did an awesome job! ^^ Keep it up! ^^, See you later! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Nowadays needless to say, there is plentiful information for people to learn all over. >> Nowadays, needless to say, there are plentiful information for people to learn all over. This kind of situation is not only helpful for people. >> CORRECT! We are living in a flood of information, and we need to be more careful in accepting information. >> CORRECT! We have to develop our abilities to tell which one is a useful thing for us. >> CORRECT! To do that, we need to tighten the censorship more than before and fight against the spread of false information. >> CORRECT! Now what our adults have to do is that our students don’t be exposed to the harmful contents. >> Now, what our adults have to do is to make our students to be exposed to the harmful contents that they might get from learning using technology. >> OR: Now, what adults have to do is to monitor the youth, so that they will not be exposed to the harmful contents that they might get from learning using technology.