homework
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Korea is in comepetitive society.
Many people kill themselves because of the stress.
And that is why korean college students give up early in Big and famous college like harvard univercity.
we usually compete each other but other country study with talks and compromise.
So I want to make a class with out competition.
강사 첨삭
A great essay TOM!
I love it! Happy hump day!
I heard about people who are committing suicide.
It is because of sress and competition.
We should take it one step at a time.
I appreciate your effort in using new vocabulary words. Great!
Have a nice day.
Teacher Nina
Korea is in comepetitive society.
>> Korea is a competitive society. Many people kill themselves because of the stress.
>> Many people kill themselves because of stress.
>> OR: Many people commit suicide because of stress. And that is why korean college students give up early in Big and famous college like harvard univercity.
>> And that is why Korean college students give up in entering big and famous schools such as Harvard university. ( Spelling check: university. ^^ ) we usually compete each other but other country study with talks and compromise.
>> We usually compete with each other, But in other countries, they just study by having a conversation and compromise with it. So I want to make a class with out competition.
>> So I want to have a class without a competition.
>> OR: I want to take a class without competing with the other students.
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