Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. ^^
I was very busy.
Here is my homework.
A long time ago, Korean women could go to school.
Most women had to work for their husband and son at the house.
So, they could know a lot of news of world.
These days women learn for themselves.
Also women's grade is higher than men.
But these days women still don't know news of world.
Because Korean women don't like news of world.
I have to try about my study and I will learn news of world.
See you later.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for making your homework.
I really appreciate it. Now, in order for you to
achieve what you desire, you have to do your best
in your studies and don\'t loose faith. have faith in yourself, okay.
Good luck.
Take care.
See you!
~~Teacher Kris
Hi. ^^I was very busy.
>> Correct
>> OR: I was busy today.Here is my homework.
>> CorrectA long time ago, Korean women could go to school.
>> A long time ago, Korean women can go to school.Most women had to work for their husband and son at the house.
>> Most women had to work for their husband and children at home.So, they could know a lot of news of world.
>> So, they could know a lot of things around the world.These days women learn for themselves.
>> These days, women learn for themselves.Also women\'s grade is higher than men.
>> Also, women\'s academic grades are higher than men.But these days women still don\'t know news of world.
>> But these days, women still do not know some of the news about the world.Because Korean women don\'t like news of world.>> So, Korean women do not like it.
I have to try about my study and I will learn news of world.
>> I have to try to succedd in my studies so that I will be able to go around the world.See you later.
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