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2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello there :) You're right. The confidence is really important to make chances more talking with foreigners and it will lead to improve the talking skill. But it's quiet hard to be confident when I face someone in face to face. There are many foreigners in my dormitory, but I can't say anything in front of them actually. One thing that makes me feel easy is there's you are. haha <Essay> It is better not to wear animal furs as possible as we can. Then we don't have to kill animals more. There's better material to make clothes. We can use it instead of animal furs. However if we must need them, we don't have a choice anyway...

강사 첨삭


Good morning!
That\'s the reason why you have to keep on improving it.
Wow, you have a lot of opportunities to practice English.
I love practicing speaking with you.
But you have to make use of it wisely.
^^ Come on! Try! Just keep on trying to start a conversation with the foreigners in your dormitory.
I hope you\'ll try it.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there :)
>> Correct!
You\'re right.

>> Correct!
The confidence is really important to make chances more talking with foreigners and it will lead to improve the talking skill.
>> Confidence
is really important to make more chances to  talk with foreigners and it will lead to the improvement of the speaking skill.
But it\'s quiet hard to be confident when I face someone in face to face.
>>
But it\'s quiet hard to be confident when I talk to someone face to face.
There are many foreigners in my dormitory, but I can\'t say anything in front of them actually.

>> Correct!
One thing that makes me feel easy is there\'s you are. haha
>> One thing that makes me feel that it\'s easy is you are there. haha
<Essay>
It is better not to wear animal furs as possible as we can.

>> Correct!
Then we don\'t have to kill animals more.

>> Then we don\'t have to kill animals anymore.
There\'s better material to make clothes.
>>
There are better materials to make clothes.
We can use it instead of animal furs.

>> Correct!
However if we must need them, we don\'t have a choice anyway...

>> However if we need them, we don\'t have a choice anyway...

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