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Hi [이름]! ^.^

Happy Thursday! ^.^

Thank you for doing a really good composition! ^.^

Thank you also for expressing your awesome opinion about the statement that was given! ^^

I understand your point.

However, I somehow disagree with what you have said through your composition.

I think the person should still pursue his goal, but he must also prepare for some options.

He must not give all of his time making his dream come true.

You are right when you said that he should also consider his future.

If I were him, I would prepare for my plan B, C, D and so on if possible.

I think giving up is not answer when you fail.

What matters is perseverance with planning! ^^

Anyway, don\'t forget to see your composition again together with some corrections and suggestions for your composition improvement.

See you later! ^^ 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

I am against this opinion.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I am against this statement.

Let’s suppose someone wants to be an actor.
>> Let\'s suppose someone wants to be an actor (PUNCTUATION MARK)

He has been trying to be an actor since he was a teenager.
>> CORRECT!

Now, he is in his late twenties, and no one knows who he is.
>> CORRECT!

Moreover no one gave him a role in their movie or TV soap opera.
>> Moreover, no one gave him a role in his movies or TV soap operas. (GRAMMAR)

>> OR: Moreover, no one gave him a role in any movies or TV dramas.

Even though he has been trying to do his best no matter what they say, the result is not what he has expected.
>> Even though he has been trying to do his best, no matter what they say, the results weren\'t what he has expected. (PUNCTUATION AND GRAMMAR)

In this case, should he keep his dream consistently?
>> CORRECT!

I think he will have to look at his situation objectively and make a decision resolutely as quickly as possible for his future.

>> CORRECT!