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2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi [이름], I do know that you can reach the goals that you\'ve been dreaming of to achieve. Read books and magazines, listen carefully and practice using English language are the basic steps for improvements. I know that you do have potentials in improving your skills, so focus the corrections that I\'m giving in our daily class. You can make a difference!!! T. Jeny   1. one-eyed a giant treasure guarded theThe one-eyed giant guarded a treasure. >>A one-eyed giant guarded the treasure.2. are the up powers piling arms nuclearThe nuclear arms are piling up powers. >>The nuclear powers are piling up arms.3. question an the important be will discussed at meetingThe important question will be an discussed at meeting. >>An important question will be discussed at the meeting.4. people audience began some among to leave theThe people began to leave among the audience. >>Some people among the audience began to leave. 5. one was men of the three in car injured thecar was injured the three man of in one >> One of the three men in the car was injured.

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