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2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What is the difference between living and exisiting? This question made me think whole day. I thought about it over and over. Ofcourset these words and sounds are different... What about the meaning of these? Somehow they have simillar meanings. It is hard to explain about the meanings.. So I tried tp make sentences with these words.. 1. I am living for exisiting. 2. I am exisiting for living. After I made these, I started thinking.. They can not be seperated each other.. Sometimes we are living for exisiting sometimes we are exisiting for living.. I want to ask you...which sectence is more meaningful for you?

강사 첨삭

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What is the difference between living and exisiting?
This question made me think whole day.

>> This question made me think for the whole day.
I thought about it over and over.

>> Correct.

Ofcourset these words and sounds are different...

>> Of course, these words are different.
What about the meaning of these?

>> What about the meaning of these words? 
Somehow they have similar meanings.

>> Correct.

 It is hard to explain about the meanings..

>> It is hard to explain their meanings.
So I tried tp make sentences with these words..
>> So I tried to make sentences with these words..

1. I am living for exisiting.

>> I live to exist.

2. I am exisiting for living.

>> I exist to live.

After I made these, I started thinking..

>> Correct.

They can not be seperated each other..

>> These words cannot be separated from one another.
Sometimes we are living for exisiting sometimes we are exisiting for living..

>> Some people live to exist and others exist to live.
I want to ask you...which sentence is more meaningful for you?

>> Correct.

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