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2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Good morning teacher Nina :) It's already Thursday! Time flies so fast. And the autumn came definitely. How is the weather in the Philippines? I don't know how it is. But take care yourself! This is my homework! Q1 -I stopped for a drink. Q2 -I stopped to buy a newspaper. Q3 -It was hard to decide. Q4 -He got paid extra for working at the weekend. Q5 -They invited us to their wedding. Q6 -It's time to take lunch. Q7 -I'm going to a shower. Q8 -I'm going out for some fresh air. Q9 -I need it for my work. Q10 -I want to lose some weight. On next Monday, I will take three examinations. I also have two examinations each on next Wednesday and Friday. (I have total five examinations.) Fortunately, all examinations don't overlap our class. So I don't need to put off the class :) I was worried that I had to put off the class because of my exams. It is just as well! Anyway, see you soon. Have a good lunch :)

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Hi there [이름]! It\'s a bit cloudy here in my city. I think it will rain again. Thanks for your concern. You should also take good care of yourself because I heard that the weather gets colder in Korea. Wow! Five exams! I know you can do it. You know what? You made my day. ^^ Hihihihi. It is because you are not going to delay our class. ^_^ Thanks for making me happy. Oh! By the way, you almost got a perfect score. ^^ Great! Can\'t wait to talk to you. Eat something for a snack, okay? See you! Teacher Nina   Good morning teacher Nina :) >> CORRECT! It\'s already Thursday! >> CORRECT! Time flies so fast. >> CORRECT! And the autumn came definitely. >> Did you mean: Autumn season definitely came to Korea. >> OR: Autumn season is already here. How is the weather in the Philippines? >> CORRECT! I don\'t know how it is. >> CORRECT! But take care yourself! >> But take care of yourself. This is my homework!>> CORRECT! Q1 -I stopped for a drink. >> CORRECT! Q2 -I stopped to buy a newspaper. >> CORRECT! Q3 -It was hard to decide. >> CORRECT! Q4 -He got paid extra for working at the weekend. >> CORRECT! Q5 -They invited us to their wedding. >> CORRECT! Q6 -It\'s time to take lunch. >> CORRECT! Q7 -I\'m going to a shower. >> for Q8 -I\'m going out for some fresh air. >> CORRECT! Q9 -I need it for my work. >> CORRECT! Q10 -I want to lose some weight. >> CORRECT! On next Monday, I will take three examinations. >> Next Monday, I will take three examinations. >> OR: On Monday, I will have three exams. I also have two examinations each on next Wednesday and Friday. >> I also have two examinations each day next Wednesday and Friday. (I have total five examinations.) >> In total, I have five examinations. Fortunately, all examinations don\'t overlap our class. >> Fortunately, all examinations won\'t overlap our class. So I don\'t need to put off the class :) >> CORRECT! I was worried that I had to put off the class because of my exams. >> CORRECT! It is just as well! >> CORRECT! Anyway, see you soon. >> CORRECT! Have a good lunch :) >> CORRECT!

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