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What is your greatest strength in English?
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My strength in English is 'Reading'.
I guess most of Korean who are in same generation with me or older generation are in a similar situation.
Because when I was student, English teachers focused on teaching only grammar and reading and every English test was also mainly focused on grammar and reading.
At that time, I didn’t realized study method like this was wrong and not balanced.
Looking back on it now, this was also problem of Korean English education system.
I’m a victim caused by wrong education system in this regard. :-(
So there are many people in Korea who can’t speak English, even short sentence, even though they are well educated for a long time.
But it’s not now and it’s good thing that current English education is being well balanced gradually.
That’s why I’m currently learning to speak English to balance my English ability.
강사 첨삭
Lovely T H U R S D A Y Mr. [이름]!!!! (\")(>_<)
Is everything great? Hope so my dear :)
You\'ve been so diligent this week even if you\'ve been busy. I appreciate all your efforts in our class!
Also, it\'s so nice to know that you want to be a good English speaker.
TRUST yourself and you have to WORK hard for that!
In the end, your perseverance will help you make your weaknesses into your strengths. :))
I believe in you :))
Lastly, your composition is really improving! You use different expressions Mr. [이름]!
I think it is also a strength of yours :)
Teacher Myra
What is your greatest strength in English?
My strength in English is \'Reading\'.
>>CORRECT
I guess most of Korean who are in same generation with me or older generation are in a similar situation.
>>I guess most Koreans who are in same generation with me or older generation are in a similar situation.
Because when I was student, English teachers focused on teaching only grammar and reading and every English test was also mainly focused on grammar and reading.
>>Because when I was student, English teachers only focused on teaching grammar and reading, and every English test was also mainly focused on grammar and reading.
At that time, I didn’t realized study method like this was wrong and not balanced.
>>At that time, I did not realize that this methos is wrong and not balanced.
Looking back on it now, this was also problem of Korean English education system.
>>Looking back on it, this is still a problem of Korean English education system.
I’m a victim caused by wrong education system in this regard. :-(
>>I\'m a victim caused by a wrong education system, in this regard. :-(
So there are many people in Korea who can’t speak English, even short sentence, even though they are well educated for a long time.
>>So, there are many people in Korea who can\'t speak English, even a short sentence, even though they are well educated for a long time.
But it’s not now and it’s good thing that current English education is being well balanced gradually.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Fortunately, this have changed and our education system is balanced gradually.
That’s why I’m currently learning to speak English to balance my English ability.
>>CORRECT
OR>> That\'s why I am improving how to speak in English to balance my ability.
Is everything great? Hope so my dear :)
You\'ve been so diligent this week even if you\'ve been busy. I appreciate all your efforts in our class!
Also, it\'s so nice to know that you want to be a good English speaker.
TRUST yourself and you have to WORK hard for that!
In the end, your perseverance will help you make your weaknesses into your strengths. :))
I believe in you :))
Lastly, your composition is really improving! You use different expressions Mr. [이름]!
I think it is also a strength of yours :)
Teacher Myra
What is your greatest strength in English?
My strength in English is \'Reading\'.
>>CORRECT
I guess most of Korean who are in same generation with me or older generation are in a similar situation.
>>I guess most Koreans who are in same generation with me or older generation are in a similar situation.
Because when I was student, English teachers focused on teaching only grammar and reading and every English test was also mainly focused on grammar and reading.
>>Because when I was student, English teachers only focused on teaching grammar and reading, and every English test was also mainly focused on grammar and reading.
At that time, I didn’t realized study method like this was wrong and not balanced.
>>At that time, I did not realize that this methos is wrong and not balanced.
Looking back on it now, this was also problem of Korean English education system.
>>Looking back on it, this is still a problem of Korean English education system.
I’m a victim caused by wrong education system in this regard. :-(
>>I\'m a victim caused by a wrong education system, in this regard. :-(
So there are many people in Korea who can’t speak English, even short sentence, even though they are well educated for a long time.
>>So, there are many people in Korea who can\'t speak English, even a short sentence, even though they are well educated for a long time.
But it’s not now and it’s good thing that current English education is being well balanced gradually.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Fortunately, this have changed and our education system is balanced gradually.
That’s why I’m currently learning to speak English to balance my English ability.
>>CORRECT
OR>> That\'s why I am improving how to speak in English to balance my ability.
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