homework

Hi [이름]! ^.^

Happy Friday! ^^

I am really sorry that you felt something was wrong with me during our class yesterday.

Frankly speaking, I have been sick since Monday.

I have a headache and stomachache.

I think this is because of Samgyupsal addiction.

Hahaha! ^^

My condition is not really serious.

It is just the reaction of my body towards my craving.

I will be totally fine later after my work.

My friends and I will eat Samgyupsal.

Hahaha! ^^

Thank you for the concern! ^.^

By the way, I really notice that you are really good at writing.

The use the vocabulary words that you know well.

There are minimal errors in your sentences.

Good job! ^^

Keep it up! ^^

Anyway, enjoy reading my comments and even the corrections and suggestions for your composition.

See you! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Hi Paula!
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Before I submit my composition, I want to talk with you about our last class.
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>> OR: Before, I submit my composition, I want to tell you about our class last time.

I thought you were in a bad mood yesterday, and I was worried about that.
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What happened to you?
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I like your cheerful personality, and I hope you are always happy.
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Anyway, today is Friday.

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Do you also take a rest for the weekend?
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>> OR: Do you also take a rest on the weekend?

>> OR: Do you also take a rest this coming weekend?

I wish you to have a great time for the weekend.
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>> OR: I wish you to have a grest time this coming weekend.

And finally, I would like to say that you are a good teacher for me.
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>> OR: Finally, I would like to tell you that you are a good teacher to me.

I am always thankful for your help.
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*ESSAY
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>> OR: [이름]

             P.S.: Below is my composition.

The way I see it, it is time to save our land.
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We are enjoying enough the results of development, and it even went too far.
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>> BETTER: We have enjoyed enough the results of development, and it even went too far.

These days, animal extinction is a serious problem that must be solved.
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This situation of animal extinction just proves how damaged our land is.
>> This just proved how damaged our land is.

Human can’t live in the land where animals hard to live.
>> Human can\'t live in the land where animals live hard.

If we ignore this kind of signals sent by animals, we can’t guarantee the future of humanity.
>> If we ignore this kind of signal sent by animals, we can\'t guarantee the future of humanity.

Even now it is not too late.
>> Even now, it is not too late.

We should pay a lot more attention for saving our land.

>> CORRECT!