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2014-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I want to speak English. Most korean students learn a lot of things to go to the university. However, I learn English for myself. Learning English is very hard to me. but I must succed. Learning English is very important to me. If I succeed speaking English, It will be my first personal accomplishment. Today's homework is very difficult to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Good evening! ^^ Thank you for making your homework. i would like to say that, everything in this world is difficult. It depends on us on how to deal with it. It depends on our will and determination to achieve our goals and make everything quite easy. So, my advice, deal with every situation that you face. be strong, okay. Good luck! Take care! ^^ Have a wonderful weekend.   ~~Teacher kris   I want to speak English. >>Correct >>OR: I want to speak English fluently.Most korean students learn a lot of things to go to the university. >> Most Korean student learn a lot of things from the university.However, I learn English for myself. >> Howver, I learn English by myself.Learning English is very hard to me. >> Correct >> OR: Learning English is quite difficult.but I must succed. >> But I have to succeed.Learning English is very important to me. >> CorrectIf I succeed speaking English, It will be my first personal accomplishment.>> CorrectToday\'s homework is very difficult to me. >> Correct

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