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Hi Paula! Good morning. How have you been during the weekend? I can’t believe how quickly time on weekend flies. Do you also think like that? Anyway, I wish you to have a good time during this week. See you! ^^ [이름]. *ESSAY I think the most important skill in order to be successful is human relations. Relationships are an even more important part of life than whatever. Man is a social animal, and everything is involved in various kinds of relations and trust. If you were the person who people unconditionally trust, I am sure your success would become a reality. It is very difficult to win the confidence of people, and it will take a very long time. There is no special way of learning this kind of skill, and no one teaches how to make myself become a reliable person. Therefore, to win the confidence of people and keep the relationships people should make an effort consistently in their own ways.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Monday! ^^   A warm Monday evening to you! ^,^   Last weekend, I had a great time with my family again, especially with my mother. Even though we only cleaned and took good care of my younger brother\'s daughter, we had a fantastic time talking with each other. I just really stayed home, but I didn\'t regret it. How about you? ^^   Same as before, I like your composition. I enjoyed reading it. I consider it as a \"thumbs-up\" composition. However, you still need to work out on your punctuation marks and sentence structure.   That\'s all for now! See you soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi Paula! >> CORRECT!Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! How have you been during the weekend?>> CORRECT! >> OR: How did you do last weekend? I can’t believe how quickly time on weekend flies.>> I can\'t believe how quickly time on weekend flies. Do you also think like that? >> CORRECT! >> OR: Do you also think the same? >> OR: Do you agree with me? Anyway, I wish you to have a good time during this week. >> CORRECT! See you! ^^>> CORRECT! [이름]. >> [이름] *ESSAY I think the most important skill in order to be successful is human relations.>> CORRECT! Relationships are an even more important part of life than whatever. >> Relationships are even more important parts of life than other things. >> OR: Relationships are far more important parts of life than other things. Man is a social animal, and everything is involved in various kinds of relations and trust. >> CORRECT! If you were the person who people unconditionally trust, I am sure your success would become a reality.>> If you are the person who people unconditionally trust, I am sure your success will become a reality. >> OR: If you were the person who people unconditionally trust, I would be sure your success would become a reality. It is very difficult to win the confidence of people, and it will take a very long time. >> It is very difficult to win the confidence of people, and it will take a very long time. There is no special way of learning this kind of skill, and no one teaches how to make myself become a reliable person. >> There is no special way of learning this kind of skill, and no one can teach how a person can be reliable. >> OR: There is no special way of learning this kind of skill, and no one can teach me how to become a reliable person. Therefore, to win the confidence of people and keep the relationships people should make an effort consistently in their own ways. >> Therefore, to win the confidence of people and keep the relationships, people should make an effort consistently in their own ways.