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If you will appear in a movie, what genre would you like to star in? Why? Ex. Horror, comedy, etc.
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If I have a chance to star in some genre, I'd like to do in S.F. movie such as Star Wars and Transformer because I enjoy watching hollywood S.F. movies.
Whenever I see a S.F. movie, I marvel at their computer graphic.
In S.F. movie, I want to fight a alien and enemy with laser gun and light saber.
It makes me excited just to think about it.
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Hi there, Mr. [이름]!!!
Howdy howdy? :D
Did you eat dinner? :))
Thanks for having the class with me a while ago. :)
It was no nice to hear your bubbly voice and thank you for informing me about the tradition in Korea! kkkk (^^.)
I will do that someday. :))
Teacher Myra
If you will appear in a movie, what genre would you like to star in? Why? Ex. Horror, comedy, etc.
If I have a chance to star in some genre, I\'d like to do in S.F. movie such as Star Wars and Transformer because I enjoy watching hollywood S.F. movies.
>>If I have a chance to star in some genre, I\'d like to do an S.F. movie such as Star Wars and Transformers, because I enjoy watching Hollywood S.F. movies.
Whenever I see a S.F. movie, I marvel at their computer graphic.
>>Whenever I see an S.F. movie, I marvel at their computer graphic
.In S.F. movie, I want to fight a alien and enemy with laser gun and light saber.
>>In an S.F. movie, I want to fight an alien and an enemy with a laser gun and a light saber.
It makes me excited just to think about it.
>>CORRECT
Howdy howdy? :D
Did you eat dinner? :))
Thanks for having the class with me a while ago. :)
It was no nice to hear your bubbly voice and thank you for informing me about the tradition in Korea! kkkk (^^.)
I will do that someday. :))
Teacher Myra
If you will appear in a movie, what genre would you like to star in? Why? Ex. Horror, comedy, etc.
If I have a chance to star in some genre, I\'d like to do in S.F. movie such as Star Wars and Transformer because I enjoy watching hollywood S.F. movies.
>>If I have a chance to star in some genre, I\'d like to do an S.F. movie such as Star Wars and Transformers, because I enjoy watching Hollywood S.F. movies.
Whenever I see a S.F. movie, I marvel at their computer graphic.
>>Whenever I see an S.F. movie, I marvel at their computer graphic
.In S.F. movie, I want to fight a alien and enemy with laser gun and light saber.
>>In an S.F. movie, I want to fight an alien and an enemy with a laser gun and a light saber.
It makes me excited just to think about it.
>>CORRECT
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