homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Tuesday! ^^
Thank you for the complement about our class yesterday!
I am really glad that somehow you had fun in our class.
I would like to say THANK YOU TOO for being a cooperative and patient student!
Don\'t worry!
I will always do my best to help you improve in English.
I know that you will speak in English fluently very soon.
Anyway, please see the corrections and suggestions below! ^^
See you! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Paula!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Hi Paula!
>> OR: Hello Paula!
Good afternoon.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Good afternoon!
I think that our last class was very good, and I am thankful that you gave me such a good lesson.
>> CORRECT!
Your encouragement always helps me improve my English level.
>> CORRECT!
I am looking forward to talking to you fluently in English. ^^
>> CORRECT!
See you!
>> CORRECT!
[이름]
>> CORRECT!
*ESSAY
I also think that dangerous sports or activities often fascinate me.
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I like doing wall climbing and bungee jumping.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I like doing some dangerous activities like wall climbing and bungee jumping.
In my case, I can feel extreme happiness through these activities.
>> CORRECT!
When I reach the top of the wall doing climbing, I can feel a sense of accomplishment.
>> CORRECT!
Regarding the bungee jumping, I didn’t experience yet.
>> Regarding bungee jumping, I haven\'t experienced it yet.
>> OR: Regarding bungee jumping, I didn\'t experience it yet.
If I have a change to do that, I am sure I won’t hesitate to jump.
>> If I have a chance to do that, I am sure I won\'t hesitate to jump.
>> OR: If I have a chance to do that, I am sure I won\'t hesitate to do it.
Before that, we all should check our safety device in advance.
>> Before that, we all should check our safety devices in advance.
>> OR: Before that, we have to check our safety gears in advance.
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