HOMEWORK
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What was your saddest childhood memory?
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Even if I was very young, I vividly remember the situation on that day...
Me and my mom carrying my sister on her back were on the way to my mother's maiden home.
We took a subway and had to transfer to another line.
But at transfer station, I alone got on the subway and subway door was closed with my mother standing outside and the subway departed.
Back then, I was really shocked, so cryed loudly in the subway.
Fortunately, some guy took me and got off on next station and brought me to a center for lost children in a subway station.
And I could meet my mother again. This is my saddest childhoom memory like nightmare.
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Hi there Mr. [이름]! :))
Great Tuesday night to you!
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s not only about your improvement, but also, it\'s about getting to know you more. :))
Your childhood memory is really intense my dear! Good thing, the guy who helped you was really kind! Thanks to him! :))
Once again, enjoy this day and see you tomorrow!
Stay cheerful!
Teacher Myra
What was your saddest childhood memory?
Even if I was very young, I vividly remember the situation on that day...
>>CORRECT
OR>> This situation happened a long time ago when I was young, but up to now, I can still vividly remember it.
Me and my mom carrying my sister on her back were on the way to my mother\'s maiden home.
>>My mom was carrying my sister on her back and we\'re on our way to my mother\'s maiden home.
We took a subway and had to transfer to another line.
>>CORRECT
But at transfer station, I alone got on the subway and subway door was closed with my mother standing outside and the subway departed.
>>But at the transfer station, I got on the subway alone. The subway door closed while my mother was standing outside and the subway departed.
Back then, I was really shocked, so cryed loudly in the subway.
>>Back then, I was really shocked so, I cried loudly in the subway.
Fortunately, some guy took me and got off on next station and brought me to a center for lost children in a subway station.
>>Fortunately, some guy took me and we got off on the next station. He brought me to a center for lost children in the subway station.
And I could meet my mother again. This is my saddest childhoom memory like nightmare.
>>And I could meet my mother again after he brought me there. This is my saddest childhood memory which is like a nightmare.
Hi there Mr. [이름]! :))
Great Tuesday night to you!
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s not only about your improvement, but also, it\'s about getting to know you more. :))
Your childhood memory is really intense my dear! Good thing, the guy who helped you was really kind! Thanks to him! :))
Once again, enjoy this day and see you tomorrow!
Stay cheerful!
Teacher Myra
What was your saddest childhood memory?
Even if I was very young, I vividly remember the situation on that day...
>>CORRECT
OR>> This situation happened a long time ago when I was young, but up to now, I can still vividly remember it.
Me and my mom carrying my sister on her back were on the way to my mother\'s maiden home.
>>My mom was carrying my sister on her back and we\'re on our way to my mother\'s maiden home.
We took a subway and had to transfer to another line.
>>CORRECT
But at transfer station, I alone got on the subway and subway door was closed with my mother standing outside and the subway departed.
>>But at the transfer station, I got on the subway alone. The subway door closed while my mother was standing outside and the subway departed.
Back then, I was really shocked, so cryed loudly in the subway.
>>Back then, I was really shocked so, I cried loudly in the subway.
Fortunately, some guy took me and got off on next station and brought me to a center for lost children in a subway station.
>>Fortunately, some guy took me and we got off on the next station. He brought me to a center for lost children in the subway station.
And I could meet my mother again. This is my saddest childhoom memory like nightmare.
>>And I could meet my mother again after he brought me there. This is my saddest childhood memory which is like a nightmare.
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