Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you for making your homework.
I actually feel what you are feeling right now. It\'s so dramatic.
We cannot escape the reality that we are growing old. But the
best thing about it is that, we are happy. You know why? It\'s
because we have our children who are following our foot steps.
Be happy [이름]. :) Always wear a smile.
~~Teacher Kris
When I am looking in the mirror, I can see long years on my face.
>> When I am looking at the mirror, I can see long years on my face.
My children grow up and I am growing old.
>> While my children are growing up, I am growing old.
So, I am happy and I old sad.
>> So, I am happy and sad as well.
A few years later, when I look in the mirror on my face, I hope I am happy
>> In the near future, When I will be looking my face at the mirror, I hope I will be happy.
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