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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello agian, Jessie
Today's topic was quiet interesting and fun. But I don't know whether you are also fun or not because you're not interested about those actually. haha
Thank you for saying to be open mind.
The next topic is interesting invention nowadays and future, isn't it?
Have a good day!
<Essay>
I do not think these are necessary, however, as you know, being physically attractive or weathy can make you happy by certain ways. It often give you confidence and have you solve some problems easier. But I believe that there's many ways that can be happy.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I was really interested in your ideas [이름].
Well, I love listening to them.
Though I don\'t really believe in some of the creatures that we talked about, it was good to think about what could possibly happen to our world in the future.
Anyway, I actually love it when you give out of this world ideas.^^
Just keep on talking [이름] okay?
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello agian, Jessie
>> Hello again Jessie!
Today\'s topic was quiet interesting and fun.
>> Correct!
But I don\'t know whether you are also fun or not because you\'re not interested about those actually. haha
>> But I don\'t know whether you also had fun or not because you\'re not interested about those actually. haha
Thank you for saying to be open mind.
>> Thank you for being open minded.
OR>> Thank you for telling me about being open minded.
The next topic is interesting invention nowadays and future, isn\'t it?
>> The next topic is interesting too. It\'s about invention nowadays and the future, isn\'t it?
Have a good day!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I do not think these are necessary, however, as you know, being physically attractive or weathy can make you happy by certain ways.
>> I do not think these are necessary, however, as you know, being physically attractive or wealthy can make you happy in certain ways.
It often give you confidence and have you solve some problems easier.
>> They often give you confidence and help you solve some problems easier.
But I believe that there\'s many ways that can be happy.
>> But I believe that there are so many ways on how we can be happy.
I was really interested in your ideas [이름].
Well, I love listening to them.
Though I don\'t really believe in some of the creatures that we talked about, it was good to think about what could possibly happen to our world in the future.
Anyway, I actually love it when you give out of this world ideas.^^
Just keep on talking [이름] okay?
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello agian, Jessie
>> Hello again Jessie!
Today\'s topic was quiet interesting and fun.
>> Correct!
But I don\'t know whether you are also fun or not because you\'re not interested about those actually. haha
>> But I don\'t know whether you also had fun or not because you\'re not interested about those actually. haha
Thank you for saying to be open mind.
>> Thank you for being open minded.
OR>> Thank you for telling me about being open minded.
The next topic is interesting invention nowadays and future, isn\'t it?
>> The next topic is interesting too. It\'s about invention nowadays and the future, isn\'t it?
Have a good day!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I do not think these are necessary, however, as you know, being physically attractive or weathy can make you happy by certain ways.
>> I do not think these are necessary, however, as you know, being physically attractive or wealthy can make you happy in certain ways.
It often give you confidence and have you solve some problems easier.
>> They often give you confidence and help you solve some problems easier.
But I believe that there\'s many ways that can be happy.
>> But I believe that there are so many ways on how we can be happy.
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