Homework

2014-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

What complaints do you have at the moment? Bible says 'It will produce thorns and thistles for you.' & 'By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food.' I dare say that there is not a easy work in the world. We must work hard, and then, we can get a fruit to eat. I have watched a drama, and the main thema was 'One who wants to wear the crown, bear the crown'. We are positioned in sociaty by my willing or by force. Someone could be born with a golden spoon in his mouth. so, he would be a king or a boss, naturally without his willing. Or, a special man could acheive the crown by his talant and ablility. I think that there is nothing to acheive, easily. Both 2 guys should bear their crown with their responsibility. Maybe, they should give up or pay many things for their crown. Certainly, they would surrender a part of their life to acheive a better thing. When we meet a big problem beyond our ability, we may be under a big stress.

강사 첨삭

What complaints do you have at the moment?


 Bible says \'It will produce thorns and thistles for you.\'& \'By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food.\' 

>>  The Bible says, \"It will produce thorns and thistles for you. By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food.\' 
 I dare say that there is not a easy work in the world.

>>  I dare to say that there is no easy work in the world.
 We must work hard, and then, we can get a fruit to eat.

>>  We must work hard so we can harvest the fruit for us to eat.
I have watched a drama, and the main thema was \'One who wants to wear the crown, bear the crown\'.

>>  I have watched a drama, and the main theme was \'The one who wants to wear the crown, bears the crown.\'

>> or; I have watched a drama and its main theme was \"He who wants to wear a crown must bear its weight.\"
 We are positioned in sociaty by my willing or by force.

>>  We are positioned in the society either in our own will or by force. 

>> or; We are positioned in the society either by force or by other circumstances.
 Someone could be born with a golden spoon in his mouth.

>>  correct!

>> or: Someone is really born with a golden spoon in his mouth.

so, he would be a king or a boss, naturally without his willing.

>>  So naturally, he could be a king or a boss even without his will.
 Or, a special man could acheive the crown by his talant and ablility.

>>  Or maybe an ordinary person could become special through his talent and ability.
 I think that there is nothing to acheive, easily.

>>  I think that there is nothing we could achieve easily.

Both 2 guys should bear their crown with their responsibility.

>>  Both guys should bear the crown together with the responsibilities coupled in it.
 Maybe, they should give up or pay many things for their crown.

>>  correct!

>> or: Maybe, they would give up or do other things just to have their crown.

Certainly, they would surrender a part of their life to acheive a better thing.

>>  correct!

>> or: But the certain thing is, they would still surrender a part of their life to achieve a better one.
 When we meet a big problem beyond our ability, we may be under a big stress.

>>  correct!

>> or; When we encounter a big problem which is beyond our ability, we would be stressed out a lot.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·