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What complaints do you have at the moment?
Bible says \'It will produce thorns and thistles for you.\'& \'By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food.\'
>> The Bible says, \"It will produce thorns and thistles for you. By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food.\'
I dare say that there is not a easy work in the world.
>> I dare to say that there is no easy work in the world.
We must work hard, and then, we can get a fruit to eat.
>> We must work hard so we can harvest the fruit for us to eat.
I have watched a drama, and the main thema was \'One who wants to wear the crown, bear the crown\'.
>> I have watched a drama, and the main theme was \'The one who wants to wear the crown, bears the crown.\'
>> or; I have watched a drama and its main theme was \"He who wants to wear a crown must bear its weight.\"
We are positioned in sociaty by my willing or by force.
>> We are positioned in the society either in our own will or by force.
>> or; We are positioned in the society either by force or by other circumstances.
Someone could be born with a golden spoon in his mouth.
>> correct!
>> or: Someone is really born with a golden spoon in his mouth.
so, he would be a king or a boss, naturally without his willing.
>> So naturally, he could be a king or a boss even without his will.
Or, a special man could acheive the crown by his talant and ablility.
>> Or maybe an ordinary person could become special through his talent and ability.
I think that there is nothing to acheive, easily.
>> I think that there is nothing we could achieve easily.
Both 2 guys should bear their crown with their responsibility.
>> Both guys should bear the crown together with the responsibilities coupled in it.
Maybe, they should give up or pay many things for their crown.
>> correct!
>> or: Maybe, they would give up or do other things just to have their crown.
Certainly, they would surrender a part of their life to acheive a better thing.
>> correct!
>> or: But the certain thing is, they would still surrender a part of their life to achieve a better one.
When we meet a big problem beyond our ability, we may be under a big stress.
>> correct!
>> or; When we encounter a big problem which is beyond our ability, we would be stressed out a lot.
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