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2014-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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But, if we blame it to others or angry to others, it is not a good idea. They will loose their respect. Neither he can not find any solution. We must study and talk with other people to solve it. And, we must have a good attitude to other people to solve this problem. If we need a help, we must ask a help with kindness. It is not possible to do whatever we want. As a counsellor, if we approach to other people and try to solve a problem by talking and respecting others, we can solve it and get a respect, too. If someone keep angry and complaints again and again, it means that he is not qualified. He can not be respectable. Because I am a king, so, if I do not need to respect my servant, certainly, the servant will not respect his king, anymore. Also, because I am paying a salery to my employee, so, if I am angry or insulting to the employee, it is not a good idea. All the employees are wolking for their dignity what they acheive everyday. They are not existing for thier boss or a king.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Mr. [이름]!

I guess the name of the drama that you have watched is \"The Heirs\" or \"The Inheritors\". Isn\'t it?

It is where you got the phrase \"One who wants to wear the crown, bears the crown.\"

I have watched it too.

And I agree with it.

A person who has a lot of power and prestige also has a lot of responsibilities, and therefore worries more than other people.

We are all wearing our own crowns. And it is not easy to bear but what we have to do is to be responsible with it and do the things that we have to do just to be able to wear for a long period of time.

Well, thanks for sharing your quite comprehensive thoughts Mr. [이름].

I\'ll take to you later!

Have a great lunch!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


But, if we blame it to others or angry to others, it is not a good idea.

>>  But if we blame it to other or be angry at them, then it is not a good idea.

They will loose their respect.

>>  correct!

Neither he can not find any solution.

>>  Neither he can find any solution
 We must study and talk with other people to solve it.

>>  correct!

And, we must have a good attitude to other people to solve this problem.

>>  And we must have a good attitude with other people to solve this problem.
 If we need a help, we must ask a help with kindness.

>>  If we need help, we must ask courteously.

It is not possible to do whatever we want.

>>  correct!
 As a counsellor, if we approach to other people and try to solve a problem by talking and respecting others, we can solve it and get a respect, too.

>>  As a counselor, if we approach other people and try to solve the problem by talking to them with respect, we can solve it and we could also earn their respect on the other hand.
 If someone keep angry and complaints again and again, it means that he is not qualified.

>>  If someone keeps on getting angry and complains all the time, it means that he is not qualified.

He can not be respectable.

>>  correct! 

>> or: He has not earned everyone\'s respect.
 Because I am a king, so, if I do not need to respect my servant, certainly, the servant will not respect his king, anymore.

>>  But because I am the King, so I do not need to respect my servants. Certainly, my servants would not show their respect to me too.
 Also, because I am paying a salery to my employee, so, if I am angry or insulting to the employee, it is not a good idea.

>>  And also, it is not because I am paying for my employees salary, I could easily get angry or insult them. Since this is not a good idea.
 All the employees are wolking for their dignity what they acheive everyday.

>>  All the employees working for their dignity and to what they have to achieve everyday.

They are not existing for thier boss or a king.

>>  They are not existing for their boss or for a king.

>> or: They do not exist just for their boss or for a king.

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