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Hi [이름]! ^.^

Happy Wednesday! ^^

I am same with you about traveling.

Frankly speaking, I don\'t really like going to other towns or places alone.

I prefer sharing my traveling time with someone who I am close to.

I totally agree that when a person travels with a companion, the burdens in traveling are lighter.

All expenses and things are shared.

By the way, your expression of your composition is better now.

You made longer sentences.

However, be careful with some errors.

Therefore, to avoid them, please see the corrections and suggestions below about your writing.

Anyway, see you very soon! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

I prefer traveling with a companion.
>> CORRECT!
The specific reasons are as below.
>> The specific reasons are as follows. (AS BELOW IS WRONG. IT DOESN\'T EXIST.)

>> OR: The specific reasons are below.
1.I am a woman.

>> 1. I am a woman. (THERE MUST BE A SPACE BETWEEN A NUMBER AND A SENTENCE.)

Women have to consider the safety first.
>> Women have to consider their safety first. (THE SAFETY IS WRONG.)

Sometimes we can hear some bad news about accident such as sexual assault.
>> Sometimes, we can hear some bad news about some accidents such as sexual assault towards women. (THERE MUST BE A COMMA AFTER THE WORD SOMETIMES WHEN YOU USE IT AT THE BEGINNING OF A SENTENCE.) 

This kind of accident is easy to happen to traveler who is traveling alone.
>> This kind of accident is easy to happen to a traveler who is alone. (AVOID REDUNDANCY. USE ARTICLES IF NECESSARY.)

>> OR: This kind of accident is easy to happen to travelers who are alone.

>> OR: This kind of accident easily happens to people who are traveling alone.
2.We can save our travelling expenses if we take a trip together.
>> 2.  We can save our traveling expenses if we take a trip together. (TRAVELLING WITH DOUBLE L IS A BRITISH SPELLING.)

>> OR: 2. I can save my traveling expenses if I take a trip with a friend.

We can find a good place to sleep at a small charge because we can split the bill.
>> We can find a good place to sleep at a small charge, because we can split the bill. (WHEN TWO SENTENCES ARE JOINED BY A CONJUNCTION, PUT A COMMA BEFORE THE USED CONJUNCTION.)

In addition, when we eat some foods, we can share one portion together.
>> CORRECT!

As you know, travelling expenses are very sensitive issue to traveler.
>> As you know, traveling expenses are very sensitive issues to travelers. (WHEN YOU MAKE A GENERAL THOUGHT, IT\'S BETTER TO USE PLURAL NOUNS IN YOUR SENTENCES.)

>> OR: As you know, traveling expenses are very sensitive issues to a traveler.
3.Sometimes we are faced with an unexpected difficulty during our trip.
>> 3. Sometimes, we are faced with unexpected difficulties during our trips.

In this situation, my companion could be a good helper.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: In this situation, my companion could be a good help.