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2014-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What can I do today to pamper myself? It sounds great! Nomarlly, I find something good for myself! It can be s[이름]ping like takig a nap or treat myself like buying food or clothes or having my own time to do something I want like studying, watching movies... After working or doing something that I have to, I try to give some prizes for me.. it doesn't matter it is big or small, cheap or expensive... like those things make me important..hehe Hi Jenny long time no hearing.. I am sorry....I had a trip with my parents to Cebu..hehe I have a request... Every Monday -Wednesday... I would like to have some other questions like multiple choices... fill in the blans....and so on.. so that I can learn other patterns.. I feel like I am stuct on my patterns... I feel frustrated.. Let's talk about this in class... /thanks for reading!!*^^*

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I\'m glad that you had a vacation with your parents. How was it? Did you have a wonderful time? Anyway, we can talk about your request further in our class later. Take care! T. JanE ^^ What can I do today to pamper myself?>> Correct It sounds great!>> Correct Normally, I find something good for myself!>> Correct It can be s[이름]ping like takig a nap or treat myself like buying food or clothes or having my own time to do something I want like studying, watching movies...>> It can be s[이름]ping, taking a nap, treating myself by buying food or clothes, having my own time to do something I want like studying or watching movies. After working or doing something that I have to, I try to give some prizes for me..>> After working or doing something, I try to give myself some prizes.  it doesn\'t matter it is big or small, cheap or expensive...>> It doesn\'t matter whether it is big or small, cheap or expensive.  like those things make me important..hehe>> Those things make me feel important. Hi Jenny long time no hearing..>> Hi, Jane, long time no hear.  I am sorry.... >> Correct I had a trip with my parents to Cebu..hehe>> Correct I have a request...>> Correct Every Monday -Wednesday... I would like to have some other questions like multiple choices...fill in the blanks....and so on.. so that I can learn other patterns..>> Correct I feel like I am stuct on my patterns...>> I feel like I\'m stuck on my patterns.  I feel frustrated..>> Correct Let\'s talk about this in class...>> Correct /thanks for reading!!*^^* >> Correct

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