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Frist, If I have received a gift of money, I will buy a piece of jewelry. Because concert will be end. That's mean is the ticket's value is not infinit. But jewerly's value in infinit untill you will be lost it. Second, I disagree the entire. Because today time named 'homo-hundred'( human can live 100years in this age) by people. As if they were entire, they can't make a money for their live. And that company is helped by entire person who is young. I don't know this grammar is sure.....ㅠㅅㅠ

Hello there [이름]! ^^ Good job in expressing your opinion about the homework. ^^ Go over the rewritten and rephrased sentences and notice that the sentences mean the same. The only dfference is the corrections are more intelligible and lucid. ^^ Keep writing and practicing to get better and better. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   Frist, If I have received a gift of money, I will buy a piece of jewelry. >> About the first situation, if I received a gift of money, I will choose to buy a piece of jewelry.Because concert will be end. That\'s mean is the ticket\'s value is not infinit. But jewerly\'s value in infinit untill you will be lost it. >> Considering that the concert will end, the ticket\'s value is not infinite while the value of jewelry is infinite unless it got lost.Second, I disagree the entire. >> I disagree entirely about the second situation where bBusinesses should hire employees for their entire lives.Because today time named \'homo-hundred\'( human can live 100years in this age) by people. >> All things considered, nowadays there are people who live for a hundred years.As if they were entire, they can\'t make a money for their live. >> If they were employed for their entire lives, they won\'t be making money their entire lives.And that company is helped by entire person who is young. >> Also, the company will give priority to young employees.I don\'t know this grammar is sure.....ㅠㅅㅠ >> I am not sure about my grammar.