homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think is better idea is frist one. (it better to enjoy your money when you earn it)
Because We don't know the future.
If I were dead tomorrow, I lost all my saving money.
And What is your idea?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good job in doing your homework. ^^ Observe the corrections made where the sentences were rewritten to make it more readable. An important reminder is to never start a sentence with \"because\" since it will make the sentence an incomplete thought.
Good job overall in expressing yourself. ^^
In my opinion, I agree with you but it is still also wise to save for the future in case of emergencies. It is good to find a balance between spending and earning money. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I think is better idea is frist one. (it better to enjoy your money when you earn it). Because We don\'t know the future.
>> I think the first idea is better wherein it is better to enjoy spending my money than earning it because I don\'t know what will happen in the future.If I were dead tomorrow, I lost all my saving money.
>> If I died tomorrow than I did not benefit from my savings.And What is your idea?
>> How about you? What is your opinion?
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