Homework.

2014-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was 28 years old, I was married. My mother was widow. So she had no husband. I wanted my mother to live together with my husband. My husband agreed. When my first daughter was born, my mother was very happy and my family were happy. When my mother's 60th birthday, my family and my mother went to Jeju Island. We spent enjoyable time. I can't forget this event. I naver go to Jeju Island with my mother because my mother passed away. I always miss my mother but that's okay because my mother is living in my heart. Good night, See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ I was emotional when I read your homework. I know that you miss your mom always but I know that she is always there guiding you wherever you go. She is like a guardian angel who always guides you. I miss my mom too, actually. She passed away when I was 15 years old. Anyway, I know that our mothers are always there for us. Take care always, [이름].   ~~ Teacher Kris   When I was 28 years old, I was married. >> I got married at the age of 28 years old.My mother was widow. So she had no husband. >> My mother was a widow that time so, she ha no husband.I wanted my mother to live together with my husband. >> I wanted my mother to move into our house with my husband.My husband agreed. >> Correct >> My husband approved. When my first daughter was born, my mother was very happy and my family were happy. >> When my first daughter was born, my mother and my family were happy.When my mother\'s 60th birthday, my family and my mother went to Jeju Island. >> During my mother\'s 60th birthday, we went to Jeju Island.We spent enjoyable time. >> CorrectI can\'t forget this event. >> I can\'t forget this moment.I naver go to Jeju Island with my mother because my mother passed away. >> I never go to Jeju Island since my mother died.I always miss my mother but that\'s okay because my mother is living in my heart.>> I always miss my mother but it\'s okay because she lives in my heart.Good night, See you tomorrow. >>

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