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2014-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Reina

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I think the job I like to do is the best one. We usually spend at least 8 hours a day for working. Sometimes we feel that we spend much more time in the work place than our home. So, I think if we don't feel happy when working, it is not a good job even though we earn a lot of money from it. And also I want a job in which I can balance between my personal life and career.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Yes indeed!
I totally agree with you when you said about \"liking your job\".
Satisfaction is really the most important thing when it comes to work.
If you are satisfied and you like what you do, you\'ll be happy even if it\'s a hard kind of job.

Thank you for sharing!^^
I\'ll see you later!^^

Teacher Reina *,*

I think the job I like to do is the best one.
>>> correct! ^^
We usually spend at least 8 hours a day for working.
>>>correct! ^^
Sometimes we feel that we spend much more time in the work place than our home.
>>> correct!^^
So, I think if we don\'t feel happy when working, it is not a good job even though we earn a lot of money from it.
>>> So, I think if we don\'t feel happy while working, it is not a good job even though we earn a lot of money from it.
And also I want a job in which I can balance between my personal life and career.
>>> I also want a job in which I can balance between my personal life and career.

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